Thursday, March 7, 2019

Mature Love ! poem



You    and   Me !

Are  Not  the  Same 

As  , We   used   to  be


May   be  this   is  Age 


Brought   us  Out  of  Cage 


Cage  of  Constant   demand 

More  and  more  want  and  Want 


Time   has  lessened  sensation

Thrill    and   silly   desperation 


Less   words    less   Chat 

Less   Physical   interact  


With    No   Verbal   deal  

I  can   tell    How   you  Feel!


In   your   eyes  ,sunken  thought

Silently  though    tell   me   Lot 


In   your   accent     tiny    change 

How   you  feeling    does  explain


Your    forehead's    slightest   curve 

Gets   on   my    Deepest    nerve 


Understanding     Unsiad   words 

Relationship     learning    guts 


Now ,  when   Souls   are   bonding   deep 

Got  ,what    searched    in  physical  meet


We   were   after  "Essence"   of  Us

That  we   found   in   ages   Thus 



                                  image   source  google (learning mind)     


Since   is   Spiritual   bonding   Need

Our    auras    taking     lead !




16 comments:

  1. So beautiful, you've got talent☺☺

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  2. Very nice verse Baili. I am always amazed by folks who can write poetry. Have a great week!

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  3. Brilliant, dear Baili!
    Hugs and blessings!

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  4. You are so talented, lovely poem.

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  5. that's interesting and very creative Baili, well done :)

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  6. What a lovely way to say that after a period of time and getting to know each other two people settle into a comfortable relationship.

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  7. Lovely, lovely poem, Baili. Hope you publish more of these gems :)

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  8. Beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it!

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  9. This resonates deeply with me, baili - well said!

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  10. What a lovely poem …
    Thank you.

    All the best Jan

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  11. Dearest Baili...oh WOW...I LOVE your beautiful poem!!!!! It resonates so deeply within my Soul...with such wisdom and understanding.
    Absolutely brilliant!!!😊😊

    All my love and hugs ❤❤❤

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  12. You have an incredible sensibility, baili.
    Have also an incredible week!

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  13. Lovely poem, Baili! You describe love so well.

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  14. You captured the essence of mature love perfectly, Baili. The freedom, the closeness, the silent communication. Every moment becomes more special when you have shared a lifetime and time is getting shorter. Thank you!

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