You and Me !
Are Not the Same
As , We used to be
May be this is Age
Brought us Out of Cage
Cage of Constant demand
More and more want and Want
Time has lessened sensation
Thrill and silly desperation
Less words less Chat
Less Physical interact
With No Verbal deal
I can tell How you Feel!
In your eyes ,sunken thought
Silently though tell me Lot
In your accent tiny change
How you feeling does explain
Your forehead's slightest curve
Gets on my Deepest nerve
Understanding Unsiad words
Relationship learning guts
Now , when Souls are bonding deep
Got ,what searched in physical meet
We were after "Essence" of Us
That we found in ages Thus
Since is Spiritual bonding Need
Our auras taking lead !
So beautiful, you've got talent☺☺
ReplyDeleteVery nice verse Baili. I am always amazed by folks who can write poetry. Have a great week!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant, dear Baili!
ReplyDeleteHugs and blessings!
You are so talented, lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed, Baili.
ReplyDeletethat's interesting and very creative Baili, well done :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely way to say that after a period of time and getting to know each other two people settle into a comfortable relationship.
ReplyDeleteLovely, lovely poem, Baili. Hope you publish more of these gems :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it!
ReplyDeleteThis resonates deeply with me, baili - well said!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem …
ReplyDeleteThank you.
All the best Jan
Dearest Baili...oh WOW...I LOVE your beautiful poem!!!!! It resonates so deeply within my Soul...with such wisdom and understanding.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely brilliant!!!😊😊
All my love and hugs ❤❤❤
You have an incredible sensibility, baili.
ReplyDeleteHave also an incredible week!
Lovely poem, Baili! You describe love so well.
ReplyDeleteYou captured the essence of mature love perfectly, Baili. The freedom, the closeness, the silent communication. Every moment becomes more special when you have shared a lifetime and time is getting shorter. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteAn amazing poem! Beautiful!
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