On a hill top house 's cozy ,calm room
She was sitting near window after dropping broom
Exhaustion made her so, to take a break
Thinking "i can do it later " for heaven's sake
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Putting head against chair ,leaving limbs loose
Exhaled stress as in water looks goose
For the several moments kept eyes closed
Soothing calmness seemed her tiredness soaked
Then she opened eyes gazed scenes before
Outside the window ,views were Still as shore
Lush Valley below ,rows of flowering trees
Even silvery stream looked not so pleased
Everything there though , But Motionless
As life worn out death's Silent Dress
In bowl of hands she placed her face
To her mind calmly a thought embrace
As fatigue keeps me "soul less " for the while
Absence of Breeze does same to trails
How Barren and Idle things without Air
As without "SPIRIT " physique has no Dare
Her inner being tied with world around
Hush and still deeply with no sign of sound
When she felt like captive in deficient hutch
At sudden she felt Cool , Gentle Touch !
Like Heaven's window opened up for hell
Soothing breeze broke the "STILLNESS SPELL"
A smile glittered in her tired eyes
With the Gratitude, she looked at skies !
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Whole valley adopted a brand new style
Brook and trees ,flowers everything Smile :)
Puff of Air put SOUL into Views :)
Vibrant and "Alive" looked valley's hues!
Birds Chirping got delightful tone :)
It was not just Water who sang alone :)
Inhaling the grace and beauty she stood
With a Cherished energy and Refreshed mood :)
Joys of life spring in her veins again !
As in dry hot June SHE GOT SOME RAIN!
Beautifully written, you are very talented:)
ReplyDeleteVery neat verse!
ReplyDeleteI hope that the heat is not too oppressive and I hope that you get cooling rains that bring release.
May we all feel the Joy of Life when we are tired and stressed!
ReplyDeleteHello, your writing and words are beautiful! We must all take in the joys of life. Happy Thursday, enjoy your day! Have a happy weekend ahead. PS, thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteAWESOME!!! :)
ReplyDeleteRain after a dry spell, and breezes on a hot day - both are so welcome!
ReplyDeleteMy favorite poem so far. Sometimes we need to stop and let emotions roll over us before we can sort them out. Let the ugly feelings go and embrace the good ones.
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ReplyDeleteBEAUTIFUL!!!
So profound and sweet. The Spirit poured out onto her, giving her just what she needed.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem l know that feeling she is expressing.
ReplyDeleteMerle.........
Beautiful, beautiful, baili.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations.
It is a very awesome poem, Baili.
ReplyDeleteLove it.
I hope you have a wonderful week end :)
Un saludo desde AlmerÃa España
ReplyDeleteReally lovely poem. Rain came and cleared her mind :)
ReplyDeletebeautiful post!!
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Awesome indeed, dearest Baili!!
ReplyDeleteI am well acquainted with the feelings being expressed in this extremely beautiful and moving poem...Spirit will never let us down when we need Him!!😊😊
I hope you are having a wonderful day, my beautiful Friend!
All my love and hugs ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Hi dear Baili, A beautiful post indeed. Isn't it wonderful how refreshing rain can be? Thank you for sharing and for your kind words on my blog. Wishing you a happy weekend ahead! John
ReplyDeleteThis was a very moving poem, Baili. Rain can lift the spirit in so many ways.
ReplyDeleteA cool breeze and reviving rain, surely two of nature's most soothing pleasures, Baili! The more I read this poem, the more it touches my soul!
ReplyDeleteYou have a wonderful blog! The topics you write about are very close to me. Thank you for sharing your thoughts!
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Wonderful poem! I love the story it tells, and I can almost feel the coolness and the relief that comes when the rain arrives.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem :-)
ReplyDeleteNature always uplifts us when we take time to see her :-)
A lovely poem dear Baili.
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan