Sitting in the room, with darkened silence
Protecting herself, from outer violence
She was shivering, with lack of hope
As about to slip, in the well of dope
Threaten by , each tiny move
Broken by , numerous groove
Very smoothly , driving her nuts
Dancing around her "ifs" and "buts"
"If i will open, window or door "
"Wild weather , will crush my core "
Rain stopped and sun came out
Time to cheer, and wander about
Opened window, and peeked through
Sense of joy , must be grow
Oh my ,it's , windy and cold
I can't fit, in this mould
Day got warm , chilled and breezy
Under blue, walking was easy
Now she was, upset by noise
Bunch of crows making it rise
"Oh they will scratch my nerves"
"Can't be focus to see or observe "
Closed the window and hold the book
But inside ,something still so crook
Banging head like ruthless hammer
From the tap, it was dropping water
Left the book and hold her head
Injured her , hit of drops so bad
Laid down, with withered breath
Pillow drank, her flowing tears
Dipped in, despair and fears
Then she felt pain in chest
Death howled , upon the heart's nest
Once it seemed that she was sunken
From the nest bird was taken
But it was , just a gust
Within which , wish of Life busted
After hours , when got to sense
Pearls of peace,, shine immense
Opened eyes, and looked around
Everything, Freshening sound
Took a Deep, and Serene breath!
Got up , with Peace so... deep!
Felt new , Strength in her Being!
On the lips ,slight smile playing :)
As "Life " for her was Calling !
As she was ready for walking!
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Since then she is Sage !
Freed herself from every Cage!
Nothing bothers , her anymore
She has Opened Soul's Door !
Towards Heaven, of Positive thoughts !
Blown away, all negative knots
Singing now a Happy Song !!!
She enjoys whatever come along!
My Precious friends hope you liked this poem above !
Please take great care ,stay strong and blessed with positive attitude!
God bless you all!!!
Nice poeme - writing by you.?
ReplyDeleteThank you dear friend!
DeleteYes this is writin by me.
Once in a while i share my poetry though English is not my native language
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us, dear Baili. I'm so glad that she found her way from despair to hope.
ReplyDeleteAmalia
xo
A very moving poem Baili. I'm so glad you shared it. Have a wonderful day :)
ReplyDelete"Freed herself from every Cage" -- a beautiful line and a beautiful wish for all!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem of hope!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem of hope!
ReplyDeleteThat is a lovely poem and suggests to me the idea of conquering feelings and fears in order to go out and enjoy life. Thank you for posting it!
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem as you catch a very important part of life that people have to go through.
ReplyDeleteIt is a great poem of hope, Baili.
ReplyDeleteThe awakening of a soul is magnificent.
ReplyDeleteA very nice poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing it with your blogging friends.
All the best Jan
Lovely poem! Thank you for sharing it with us!
ReplyDeleteIt's absolutely divine!
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend
Free - lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteYou have such a broad English vocabulary that enriches your poetry and all your writing, baili. You create such clear images for the reader. I have wished more than once that I could read the poetry that you write in your own language where you are undoubtedly even more adept. Thank you for sharing what you write.
ReplyDeleteYou are so sweet my precious friend Jenny!
Deletei felt my eyes teary with your kind response!
I am just struggler in field of poetry specially in english language which beautiful and vast as my own language Urdu .
I am glad you liked my spontaneous effort my friend
Just beautiful, Baili. I may not understand all of it-language barrier perhaps, but I so love your heart felt words. Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteJane x
a very moving poem, Baili. It brought tears in my eyes
ReplyDeleteBaili, I do love your poems, my friend. Pearls of peace, shine immense.....what a wonderful sentence. So much negativity in the world today, and I just got a comment that didn't sound too sincere. But I won't let people's frustration in life tamper with the joy that I feel at Christmas, and I can see that you won't either.
ReplyDeleteLet's celebrate this wondrous season together, shall we?
love, ~Sheri
ps.....I have had this picture in my files of the girl in yellow for a long time. Just waiting for the right moment to use it. Isn't it beautiful?
Thank you dear friend!
DeleteI am so happy that you liked my simple words!
I am proud of your adoration for your self and effort to push away all negativity that comes to you by some sick mind
Gostei imenso do poema. Cheio de conteúdo e emocionalmente muito forte.
ReplyDeleteUma boa semana.
Um beijo.
A hopeful attitude is so important even though it can be difficult sometimes.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, Baili! You hold such power in your words!
ReplyDeletebe blessed, dear one....<3
glad this all ended with a positive theme, it is so sad when people are in deep stress and depression, it is sometimes hard to see past pain!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem!! Alot of touching words and thoughts! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful portrayal of moving from despair to hope, Baili!
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