She was sitting , on the desk
in the garden , beside the lack
Which was silent , and still
As laid , after taking the pill
Sun slipped away , behind the hill
Breez was trying to lake , chill
with her tricks, trying to tease
sprinkling over , golden leaves
By creating , circles around
within trees , making sounds
But in vain , her all tries
lake produced ,no move or voice
calm and cool , without noise
Like , before fool ,stand the wise
She was looking ,at the lake
web of silence wanted to break
in which stuck , were so many gloom
Many questions , secrets , doom
Though the surface was soothing and calm
But in bottom saw lot , when zoom
She got up , and came near
with a smile , giving cheer
Asked the lack ,why is she so sad?
Beautiful evening ,what is so bad ?
Lake replied ,with deeply sorrow
For me same, today , tomorrow
I am stuck , here for years
Gathering only , sky's tears
I can't move ,i cannot flow
Cannot groom , and cannot grow
Look at stream ,she is happy and sing
How much joys she seems to bring
.
She smiled, with serene face
And spoke with wisdom and grace
How sad ,your thoughts sound
Can't you feel, the blessings around
and how great! , that you gave them life
Realize this , and feel pride
You are source , to so many here
Self pity , is totally unfair .
Don't feel less, than flowing stream
You think songs, but might scream
She is travelling towards the sea
where she think ,she meant to be
But each time , thrown back aloud
in the shape , of desperate cloud
Cloud that ,turn it into snow
She melt down ,again began to flow
She is suffering with lack of love
Strangers meet , with every curve .
She is running into the circle
And you are beautiful miracle
happened to beautiful town
I am friend , don't feel alone .
Dear friends ,take great care ,love you all .
wishing you all a happy ,healthy prosperous life .
Great effort in feelings. :-)
ReplyDelete"and you are a beautiful miracle"
ReplyDeletethis is so beautiful.
thank you for sharing, dear one!
<3
be blessed!
The lake brings comfort, lovely writing!
ReplyDeleteI have been enjoying a beautiful life the last few days and I feel like the rushing water that sings a song
ReplyDeleteUm belo texto a acompanhar as fotografias igualmente belas. Gostei imenso.
ReplyDeleteUma boa semana.
Um beijo.
Lovely. Even though the lake thinks it is sitting still and accomplishing nothing it is the catalyst for all the life around it. And parts of it evaporate into the air. When enough of the drops get together they must again come to earth. They are absorbed into the soils where they gather with other drops which flow back into the lake. You captured it perfectly.
ReplyDeleteOh dear Emma!
DeleteYou captured it even more beautifullbeautifully!
Thank you dear
Beautiful, Baili. So much feeling!
ReplyDeleteOh this is incredibly beautiful and full of emotion.
ReplyDeleteThis is a sweet poem about the lake, Baili. You know, I've always loved the lakes and rivers and streams and brooks. There is a peacefulness and calm that the waters bring, and I appreciate them very much. You keep writing your poetry, Baili. I love reading it. : )
ReplyDelete~Sheri
I love your beautiful poem, Baili! So many feelings!
ReplyDeleteThis is superb verse Baili I love the way that you drew the contrast between the lake and the the stream.
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem Baili, wise words written very well, I enjoyed this so much.
ReplyDeleteIt's the same for all of us, isn't it? We can't change who we fundamentally are, and we don't need to, because we are all important in different ways. Lovely thoughts and wonderful poem, my friend :)
ReplyDeleteFriends are the most important treasure we can keep.
ReplyDeleteWhat indeed a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeletePoem is Great
ReplyDeletebaili, isn't that just a poem describing a mother's life to a T? You have a way of putting things. :)
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem, friendship is indeed at the heart of all things.
ReplyDeleteAmalia
xo
Your words flow like the stream and soothe like the lake.
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem, great reminder that we need to be happy in ourselves the way we were made, and how important we are to those around us
ReplyDeleteImagem tão linda, e o poema é me faz pensar, refletir...
ReplyDeleteBoa semana!
Abraço!
Streams are so soothing.
ReplyDeleteLovely writing, and your choice of images is perfect!
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
Truly beautiful! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Baili!
ReplyDeleteWe are never alone or sad when friends are close by...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for visiting my blog. Hope to see you there soon.
All the best
Marta
" And you are beautiful miracle " Very beautiful, this part! Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteThe way you write is engaging and engages the hearts of readers.
A river that was so beautiful but that saw the negative side of its natural state. Until her friend showed her how much beauty there is around her.
Your dream world has enchanted me so much.
Many thanks for the words left on my blog.
Tenha uma semana abençoada de paz, luz e alegria !
Beautiful words Baili. Good wishes, Sue xx
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely beautiful -- and wise!
ReplyDeleteWonderful words and soothing pictures to make my day! Hugs...RO
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words and you've chosen the perfect photos. Thank you Baili :)
ReplyDeleteThat's very nice Baili :)
ReplyDeleteGreat post!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful photos to go with your words!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful image and truly wonderful words. I so loved reading your poem.
ReplyDeleteHave a magical weekend :)
Great poem, my friend. I love it. Wonderful words and thoughts. ♥
ReplyDeleteDear Baili - Nice emotion-telling in poetry. I like to be at the lakeside simply appreciating the stillness of the water and the surroundings. I also like to listen to the merry whispering of the flow of a river. On both occasion, I know how you become contemplative.
ReplyDeleteThank you for seeing my old post about glorious Nara in autumn. I look forward to those scenery at least one month ahead. Have happy days ahead.
Yoko