Precious Fellow In this whole world everyone needs a magical hug to be in his refreshing form again .
Please give this magical hug to lighten up the heart of your loved ones as without expression love seems incomplete and torn. This is my message for each family !!!
On the surface, of stormy sea
We are floating, ,just you and me
Wind is strong, and waves are high
Slight move, and we both can die
Rain is hard , like showering stones
Gust of cold, piercing my bones
Each time, with the lightening spark
Memories .., flash in dark
Shivering on, the jigging boat
Feeling dragged by roaming moat
Standing close, yet so far
Faded by, internal wars
You are silent, and i am still
Fighting against , our heart's will
I don't know , that what you want
I can tell , my soul demand
All i want a Magical Hug
Which will be , my Flying rug
Look at me ,you hold me tight
Darkness will, turn into bright
Stormy sea , will be lashing meadow
High waves will be waving trees though
Push of winds will lap of mom
In or out ,both storms will calm
Our world , will be full of joy
Only smiles, no place for cry .
How did he , heard unsaid thought
As i saw , him changing lot
Overwhelmed, by his next move
I just got , his hidden love's proof
Love that hidden why ?, don't know !
Upwards stopped but inwards grow
Did not finish, though got rust
Things still shine , under dust
All it needed, to be dusted off
Then is sen it's rising graf
Words got lost though heart talk
Never gave up silent knock
Which was heard by him finally
And he opened door happily
Door of ego's shallow scary cage
Birds of hearts flew with the grace
Souls were serene after long tug
Middle of storm i got my magical hug!
Hugs and lots of love ,best wishes and prays for all of you my dear friends.
Take great care God Bless you all!!!
Please give this magical hug to lighten up the heart of your loved ones as without expression love seems incomplete and torn. This is my message for each family !!!
On the surface, of stormy sea
We are floating, ,just you and me
Wind is strong, and waves are high
Slight move, and we both can die
Rain is hard , like showering stones
Gust of cold, piercing my bones
Each time, with the lightening spark
Memories .., flash in dark
Shivering on, the jigging boat
Feeling dragged by roaming moat
Standing close, yet so far
Faded by, internal wars
You are silent, and i am still
Fighting against , our heart's will
I don't know , that what you want
I can tell , my soul demand
All i want a Magical Hug
Which will be , my Flying rug
Look at me ,you hold me tight
Darkness will, turn into bright
Stormy sea , will be lashing meadow
High waves will be waving trees though
Push of winds will lap of mom
In or out ,both storms will calm
Our world , will be full of joy
Only smiles, no place for cry .
How did he , heard unsaid thought
As i saw , him changing lot
Overwhelmed, by his next move
I just got , his hidden love's proof
Love that hidden why ?, don't know !
Upwards stopped but inwards grow
Did not finish, though got rust
Things still shine , under dust
All it needed, to be dusted off
Then is sen it's rising graf
Words got lost though heart talk
Never gave up silent knock
Which was heard by him finally
And he opened door happily
Door of ego's shallow scary cage
Birds of hearts flew with the grace
Souls were serene after long tug
Middle of storm i got my magical hug!
Hugs and lots of love ,best wishes and prays for all of you my dear friends.
Take great care God Bless you all!!!
Baili your poem is truly magical and I loved it so much. Thank you so much for sharing. My magical hug is winging it's way to you as I type.
ReplyDeleteHave a truly wonderful weekend with your family. Hugs from us xx
Thank you dear Prunella!
DeleteI just caught your hug that came to flying by :) Same to you my sweet friend!
A hug can make everything so much better! I loved this, Baili.
ReplyDeleteI agree dear Marie!
Deletethings that get complicated by the time through an self produced distance resolve with one sinseer and loving hug immediately
Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteOh Baili, I have tears in my eyes, and I didn't know you were a poet. I love poetry. Thank you for the magical hug, and now I will pass it on to my family.
ReplyDeleteSuch a precious and beautiful person you are, Baili.
~Sheri
Either your Kind words made my eyes wet dear Sheri!!!
DeleteI was poet since age of nine but since some years life got too busy with rush and chores so my poetry got under cover of so much stuff to do and think .
I am so happy that you are going to pass this lovely warmth of your kind soul to your loved ones.
Thank you sooo much for your sweet and generous words for me i am blushing and eyes are glittering with tears!
Those magical hugs are good for both people involved.
ReplyDeleteHow true dear Emma .Because both need this without acknowledging it
DeleteBoth of my dogs give me magical hugs. Loved your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Annie!
DeleteI can imagine the peace and serenity you feel while they hug you my friend!
Hug are great!
ReplyDeleteI like your poem.
Have a great week!
Of course they are brain!
Deletelife is shallow and meaningless until you give or have one
Wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. Take care.
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful. Someone was inspired.
ReplyDeleteJoy's hugs to you.
Thank you Martin!
DeleteI am honoured if my simple words are capable to inspire .
Best wishes for each moment you going to live my friend!
What a beautiful poem, Baili. I love it! And I agree with the quote: A hug can say what words cannot! Hugs, my friend.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Mia!
Deletewords are never able to convey the true depth of love you have for someone but a simple loving hug can transform your soul's message to the heart of you loved one swiftly
Baili, this is such a lovely poem and I love the image, too!
ReplyDeleteThank you my friend Lind!!!
Deletei am glad you liked it ,hug is necessity of each soul to release and unburden it from all worldly concerns for a while
Thank you dear Christine and Mr Shife!
Deletethings still shine under dust... I like that, there's a lot of beauty hidden under dust in this world.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Fairy!
Deleteyou are so right there is still hope and faith in the hearts which still spreading the beauty of humanity and goodness all around the world.
Through this line i wanted to reveal the emotions of loving hearts of one family members that over ruled by so many fake and false perceptions still somewhere deep inside had the love and sincerity for each other and a magical hug rediscover that love
Dearest Baili, your poem is amazing. We are both non-native English speakers, and I can only dream of writing poetry as beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThe topic is very important. After having read an article, I wanted to post about it too. Hugs are important to all of us, but the caring touch is v i t a l especially to children and old persons, with perhaps limited verbal abilities.
Thank you for the lovely post. Big, big hugs! ♥
Dear Sara thank you so much for your positive response to my this little poetic effort .
DeleteI used to write poetry since age of almost nine in native language and if to publish it ,it will be quite a thick book but poetry in English is really like tough job for me .
i last night sat with laptop and this poem just came to as a ball comes from outside when kids play near house lol.
i had no intention to publish or even save it in my draft but i did it don't know how and why in rush right before going to bed.
As for as it belongs to your ability to write poetry believe me i feel stuck with so limited words to appreciate your Magnificent Blog .
YOU DO POETRY THROUGH YOUR LENSES Darling!!!
When i open your page it feels like i have opened a beautiful book of poetry believe me
Lovely post! A big hug to you!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Susi .
DeleteSame to you my friend
thanks for your visit
ReplyDeleteyes we had lot of rain lately
nice words here and a nice hug
Dear Baili, sending you a magical hug to be used whenever you run out of others. Put it in your hug bank and retrieve it as needed.
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Carol
How sweet of you dear Carol!
DeleteI will for sure.
Thank you so much for your precious kind words my friend!
What a truly inspiring post. Thank you for reminding me that something as easy, and simple as a hug can make such a difference in someone's life.
ReplyDeleteGod Bless You.
Debbie
xo
Thank you dear Debbie!
DeleteThat' s all i want to approach.
Glad you realiezed the true meaning of my words .
What a truly inspiring post. Thank you for reminding me that something as easy, and simple as a hug can make such a difference in someone's life.
ReplyDeleteGod Bless You.
Debbie
xo
Hugs are wonderful. - Beautiful poem, Did you write it? - Just became a Follower of your Blog.
ReplyDeleteOf course hugs are special my friend, they have ability to uplift one'soul and drop him a peace of heart when he needed it badly but unable to express his desire
DeleteAnd yes i wrote thus poem dear lda
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem! We can tell that it comes really from the soul.
ReplyDeleteI love to give and to receive hugs. They are silent but with a lot of feelings.
Have a great weekend
Thank you my friend!
DeleteYou said very beautiful about hug.
To translate my words i chose
This image that reveals the innocence and purity of a true loving hug!
A hug is a wonderful thing, the human touch does bring comfort.
ReplyDeleteI did enjoy reading your poem.
All the best Jan
Thank you dear Jane!
DeleteA hug can change the whole scenario within moment through the transmission of love and care from touch of one to his loved one.
Beautiful thoughts and elegant writing, baili. I'm happy you felt moved to write this poem, as I know you have worried about having no inspiration lately. This is truly lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Jenny!
DeleteI am also happy that this poem came to my head when after dinner i was taking little walk in my front yard and my heart made rush to write and publish it
Thank you, dear friend, for sharing this beautiful poem with us. Lots of hugs to you xo
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Martha!
DeleteI am glad you liked it my friend
Hug!
ReplyDelete:-)
Same to you my friend!
DeleteLovely poem, with a loving message. I read it late in the evening and appreciate the good thoughts it sends me to bed with. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteThank you Geo!
DeleteI am glad that you sensed the essence of this little piece of poetry!
Thank you for beautiful words
Dearest Baili...wow...such a beautiful poem and heart-warming photo!
ReplyDeleteSo incredibly moving, this touched me deeply...
thank you so much for sharing this.:))
A Hug xoxoxo
Thank you dear Ygraine!
DeleteI can't tell you how happy i feel when such kind words come from excellent poet like you.
I am honoured my friend!
Love.
ReplyDeleteDelightful :-) Sending you some *hugs*
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Cherie!
Deleteeither i am sending you hugs!!!
Beautiful. :-)
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
Thank you Cuban friend
Deleteglad you are back to your blogging world again!
Greetings from Asia Pakistan
beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteI love hugs!
greetings
Thank you George!
DeleteEverybody love hugs including those who think they don't want it unconsciously
Just beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping a comment in my hub, God bless you everyday! :)
Um texto lindÃssimo! Todos os abraços são mágicos. Porque um abraço é o lugar onde aceitamos ser felizes sem qualquer condição...
ReplyDeleteUma boa semana.
Um beijo.
Thank you dear Grace!
ReplyDeleteso true that each hug can be magical on the terms of love and care it has within
This is very nice!
ReplyDeleteWhat a splendid and delightful one to read with great form. Thanks for sharing and greetings!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear friend!
DeleteI am glad that you found it good as i know your huge love and deep sense of poetry
So lovely dear Baili - and thankyou for your kind visit and words. It's nice to be back blogging and catching up once more :D) and a Hug to you xx
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Sue ,i like your blog and love your art .i am happy that you are back with your beautiful sharing.
DeleteMuch love and hugs to you too my friend
Thank you! Big Hugs and Much Love! This is so beautiful! I love the poem and image!
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Stacy!
DeleteHeartiest best wishes for you and your beautiful art adventures
You are amazing, Baili! I don't know how you do it all! Numerous inspiring posts, one after another; amazing poetry! You use ordinary English words, but you put them together in a fresh and vivid way to create striking images! I'm a big believer in hugs. I used to joke about teaching by saying, "I have the best job in the world! I get at least fifty hugs a day!" That was an aspect of my career that I absolutely love! I wish I could give you a real hug right now, my soulful friend; instead I'll send you a big warm hug with lots of love!
ReplyDeleteDear Louise your kind words are enough beautiful and warm to make me feel that you just gave me a Big MAGICAL HUG!
ReplyDeleteSending you too LOTS OF LOVE AND HUGS MY PRECIOUS FRIEND!
Beautiful! ♥♥♥
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