Friday, September 15, 2017

Magical Hug!!!

    Precious   Fellow  In  this  whole   world   everyone  needs  a  magical   hug   to  be   in  his   refreshing  form  again .

Please  give   this  magical  hug  to  lighten  up  the  heart  of  your  loved  ones  as  without  expression   love   seems   incomplete  and   torn. This  is my  message  for  each   family !!!







           On   the  surface,  of  stormy  sea

           We  are   floating, ,just   you  and  me

         
          Wind   is  strong,   and  waves  are   high

           Slight  move,   and  we  both  can  die

       
           Rain   is   hard , like   showering  stones

            Gust  of  cold,   piercing   my  bones


           Each   time,  with   the   lightening   spark

           Memories ..,    flash  in     dark



         Shivering   on,  the   jigging  boat

         Feeling  dragged  by  roaming   moat


         Standing    close,   yet  so  far

         Faded   by,   internal    wars


         You    are   silent,    and  i  am  still

        Fighting    against ,  our   heart's   will


       I  don't  know , that  what   you  want

       I   can    tell , my   soul   demand


      All   i   want  a  Magical    Hug

      Which   will  be , my   Flying   rug


      Look   at   me  ,you  hold  me   tight

      Darkness    will,   turn   into  bright


      Stormy   sea ,  will  be  lashing    meadow

      High   waves  will  be  waving   trees  though


     Push  of   winds   will   lap   of   mom

     In  or  out  ,both   storms  will  calm


      Our    world ,    will   be   full  of  joy

       Only  smiles,  no  place   for   cry  .


       
        How   did   he ,  heard  unsaid   thought

        As  i   saw ,  him changing   lot

      
      Overwhelmed,  by  his  next  move  

       I   just   got ,  his   hidden   love's  proof 


       Love   that  hidden   why ?, don't  know !

       Upwards   stopped  but  inwards  grow 


      Did   not  finish,   though  got   rust  

      Things   still   shine ,   under   dust  


      All   it   needed,   to  be  dusted   off

      Then   is   sen   it's   rising   graf  


    Words   got   lost   though  heart   talk

     Never   gave   up   silent    knock 



      Which   was   heard   by   him   finally  

      And   he   opened   door   happily  


     Door   of    ego's   shallow   scary   cage  

     Birds   of   hearts   flew  with   the   grace  


      Souls   were   serene   after   long   tug  

      Middle   of   storm   i  got   my  magical  hug!

      

     
Hugs  and   lots  of  love  ,best  wishes  and  prays  for  all  of  you my  dear  friends.
Take  great  care  God  Bless  you   all!!!





       


   


        

70 comments:

  1. Baili your poem is truly magical and I loved it so much. Thank you so much for sharing. My magical hug is winging it's way to you as I type.
    Have a truly wonderful weekend with your family. Hugs from us xx

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    1. Thank you dear Prunella!
      I just caught your hug that came to flying by :) Same to you my sweet friend!

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  2. A hug can make everything so much better! I loved this, Baili.

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    1. I agree dear Marie!

      things that get complicated by the time through an self produced distance resolve with one sinseer and loving hug immediately

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  3. Oh Baili, I have tears in my eyes, and I didn't know you were a poet. I love poetry. Thank you for the magical hug, and now I will pass it on to my family.

    Such a precious and beautiful person you are, Baili.

    ~Sheri

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    1. Either your Kind words made my eyes wet dear Sheri!!!

      I was poet since age of nine but since some years life got too busy with rush and chores so my poetry got under cover of so much stuff to do and think .

      I am so happy that you are going to pass this lovely warmth of your kind soul to your loved ones.

      Thank you sooo much for your sweet and generous words for me i am blushing and eyes are glittering with tears!

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  4. Those magical hugs are good for both people involved.

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    1. How true dear Emma .Because both need this without acknowledging it

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  5. Both of my dogs give me magical hugs. Loved your poem.

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    1. Thank you so much Annie!

      I can imagine the peace and serenity you feel while they hug you my friend!

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  6. Hug are great!

    I like your poem.

    Have a great week!

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    1. Of course they are brain!

      life is shallow and meaningless until you give or have one

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  7. Wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing. Take care.

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  8. Simply beautiful. Someone was inspired.
    Joy's hugs to you.

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    1. Thank you Martin!

      I am honoured if my simple words are capable to inspire .
      Best wishes for each moment you going to live my friend!

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  9. What a beautiful poem, Baili. I love it! And I agree with the quote: A hug can say what words cannot! Hugs, my friend.

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    1. Thank you dear Mia!

      words are never able to convey the true depth of love you have for someone but a simple loving hug can transform your soul's message to the heart of you loved one swiftly

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  10. Baili, this is such a lovely poem and I love the image, too!

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    1. Thank you my friend Lind!!!

      i am glad you liked it ,hug is necessity of each soul to release and unburden it from all worldly concerns for a while

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    2. Thank you dear Christine and Mr Shife!

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  11. things still shine under dust... I like that, there's a lot of beauty hidden under dust in this world.

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    1. Thank you dear Fairy!
      you are so right there is still hope and faith in the hearts which still spreading the beauty of humanity and goodness all around the world.

      Through this line i wanted to reveal the emotions of loving hearts of one family members that over ruled by so many fake and false perceptions still somewhere deep inside had the love and sincerity for each other and a magical hug rediscover that love

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  12. Dearest Baili, your poem is amazing. We are both non-native English speakers, and I can only dream of writing poetry as beautiful.
    The topic is very important. After having read an article, I wanted to post about it too. Hugs are important to all of us, but the caring touch is v i t a l especially to children and old persons, with perhaps limited verbal abilities.
    Thank you for the lovely post. Big, big hugs! ♥

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    1. Dear Sara thank you so much for your positive response to my this little poetic effort .
      I used to write poetry since age of almost nine in native language and if to publish it ,it will be quite a thick book but poetry in English is really like tough job for me .
      i last night sat with laptop and this poem just came to as a ball comes from outside when kids play near house lol.
      i had no intention to publish or even save it in my draft but i did it don't know how and why in rush right before going to bed.

      As for as it belongs to your ability to write poetry believe me i feel stuck with so limited words to appreciate your Magnificent Blog .
      YOU DO POETRY THROUGH YOUR LENSES Darling!!!

      When i open your page it feels like i have opened a beautiful book of poetry believe me

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  13. Lovely post! A big hug to you!

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    1. Thank you dear Susi .
      Same to you my friend

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  14. thanks for your visit
    yes we had lot of rain lately
    nice words here and a nice hug

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  15. Dear Baili, sending you a magical hug to be used whenever you run out of others. Put it in your hug bank and retrieve it as needed.
    Blessings,
    Carol

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    1. How sweet of you dear Carol!

      I will for sure.
      Thank you so much for your precious kind words my friend!

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  16. What a truly inspiring post. Thank you for reminding me that something as easy, and simple as a hug can make such a difference in someone's life.
    God Bless You.
    Debbie
    xo

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    1. Thank you dear Debbie!

      That' s all i want to approach.
      Glad you realiezed the true meaning of my words .

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  17. What a truly inspiring post. Thank you for reminding me that something as easy, and simple as a hug can make such a difference in someone's life.
    God Bless You.
    Debbie
    xo

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  18. Hugs are wonderful. - Beautiful poem, Did you write it? - Just became a Follower of your Blog.

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    1. Of course hugs are special my friend, they have ability to uplift one'soul and drop him a peace of heart when he needed it badly but unable to express his desire

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    2. And yes i wrote thus poem dear lda

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  19. What a beautiful poem! We can tell that it comes really from the soul.
    I love to give and to receive hugs. They are silent but with a lot of feelings.
    Have a great weekend

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    1. Thank you my friend!

      You said very beautiful about hug.
      To translate my words i chose
      This image that reveals the innocence and purity of a true loving hug!

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  20. A hug is a wonderful thing, the human touch does bring comfort.
    I did enjoy reading your poem.

    All the best Jan

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    1. Thank you dear Jane!

      A hug can change the whole scenario within moment through the transmission of love and care from touch of one to his loved one.

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  21. Beautiful thoughts and elegant writing, baili. I'm happy you felt moved to write this poem, as I know you have worried about having no inspiration lately. This is truly lovely!

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    1. Thank you dear Jenny!

      I am also happy that this poem came to my head when after dinner i was taking little walk in my front yard and my heart made rush to write and publish it

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  22. Thank you, dear friend, for sharing this beautiful poem with us. Lots of hugs to you xo

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    1. Thank you dear Martha!

      I am glad you liked it my friend

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  23. Lovely poem, with a loving message. I read it late in the evening and appreciate the good thoughts it sends me to bed with. Thank you.

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    1. Thank you Geo!

      I am glad that you sensed the essence of this little piece of poetry!

      Thank you for beautiful words

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  24. Dearest Baili...wow...such a beautiful poem and heart-warming photo!
    So incredibly moving, this touched me deeply...
    thank you so much for sharing this.:))

    A Hug xoxoxo

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    1. Thank you dear Ygraine!

      I can't tell you how happy i feel when such kind words come from excellent poet like you.
      I am honoured my friend!

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  25. Delightful :-) Sending you some *hugs*

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    1. Thank you dear Cherie!

      either i am sending you hugs!!!

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    1. Thank you Cuban friend

      glad you are back to your blogging world again!

      Greetings from Asia Pakistan

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  27. beautiful poem


    I love hugs!

    greetings

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    1. Thank you George!

      Everybody love hugs including those who think they don't want it unconsciously

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  28. Just beautiful!

    Thanks for dropping a comment in my hub, God bless you everyday! :)

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  29. Um texto lindíssimo! Todos os abraços são mágicos. Porque um abraço é o lugar onde aceitamos ser felizes sem qualquer condição...
    Uma boa semana.
    Um beijo.

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  30. Thank you dear Grace!

    so true that each hug can be magical on the terms of love and care it has within

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  31. What a splendid and delightful one to read with great form. Thanks for sharing and greetings!

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    1. Thank you dear friend!

      I am glad that you found it good as i know your huge love and deep sense of poetry

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  32. So lovely dear Baili - and thankyou for your kind visit and words. It's nice to be back blogging and catching up once more :D) and a Hug to you xx

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    1. Thank you dear Sue ,i like your blog and love your art .i am happy that you are back with your beautiful sharing.

      Much love and hugs to you too my friend

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  33. Thank you! Big Hugs and Much Love! This is so beautiful! I love the poem and image!

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    1. Thank you dear Stacy!


      Heartiest best wishes for you and your beautiful art adventures

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  34. You are amazing, Baili! I don't know how you do it all! Numerous inspiring posts, one after another; amazing poetry! You use ordinary English words, but you put them together in a fresh and vivid way to create striking images! I'm a big believer in hugs. I used to joke about teaching by saying, "I have the best job in the world! I get at least fifty hugs a day!" That was an aspect of my career that I absolutely love! I wish I could give you a real hug right now, my soulful friend; instead I'll send you a big warm hug with lots of love!

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  35. Dear Louise your kind words are enough beautiful and warm to make me feel that you just gave me a Big MAGICAL HUG!

    Sending you too LOTS OF LOVE AND HUGS MY PRECIOUS FRIEND!

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