Monday, May 30, 2011

Lost in Lust and Winner with Grace ( poem)

Hey rabbit you ran fast,

but see what have you lost,

your true pleasure of walk,

connection between mind and heart,

in your such wild run,

may be you had enough fun,

but did you think of those ,

meanwhile so close,

you crushed under your feet,

who have been to you so sweet,

now,think you won the race,

but in mirror look at your face,

where has the gentleness gone?,

like insects destroyed whole corn,

and left the ruined fields back,

where whole green turned in black,

did you ever think of being slow,

the way all nature's things grow,

as life take step after step,

as smoothly we take breath,

as beautifully flow the stream,

same way we should chase our dream,

be still and steady in race,

loose never self respect or grace,

keep eye on the wining spot,

put effort with the will power lot,

dont push and crush any other,

stay calm,have faith,move further,

and then,when you will get destination,

your face hold prettiest expression,

your smile will always be with you,

deep in heart,even enemy will love you,


  1. Very beautiful and meaningful poetry.

  2. Ahhh I honestly love the meaning...Really there's no need to rush things.

    Thanks for visiting Shabana. I've been so so busy again that I rarely have a chance to blog hop. Thanks for the wishes! Hope all is well at your end. God bless always...

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  4. Wow! Amazing how you use the words to paint such a beautiful picture, Baili. Loved it!

  5. Thought full one....

    but in the rat race of life we just don't care about it and want to get every thing in a very short span of time....there is always a lack of Patience.

  6. superb rhyme..meaningful lines..

  7. This reminds me of the my grade school story about the monkey and the turtle for a race. The monkey was very confident and boastful that he would win the competition because he was wise and quick. So along the way, he climbed up trees and eat as much as he could that eventually he fell asleep. While the turtle walked steadily without resting and successfully finished the line first.

    It's a very true reminder to all of us. We don't need to rush things, and think that we are just too good to finish them correctly. It is but wise to do things slowly but surely.

  8. Nicely said, love the last part bout the enemy. Very true indeed, when we wear a sincere smile always on our face others do feel our happiness. Let's spread happiness always

  9. Hi Shabana! Love your poem....isn't it so true we lose when we hurry...

    Also I wanted to take this opportunity to present to you the 'Stylish Blogger Award' for your colorful as well as meaningful posts. Details are found here:


  10. This is a really beautiful post! So true!
    I have nominated your blog for the sunshine award :) - all the details are over at my blog. It is for those blogs that bring sunshine into ones day, and reading your stories and poems does just that.
    I hope you are doing well, and that you enjoy the rest of the week.
    Thank you for your great blog!

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    I just would like to inform you that I choose your blog to receive the Sunshine Award. You continue to inspire me with your beautiful poems and literary attempts and therefore you deserve to get this award. Visit my site and you will see I have written down a link to your site.

    Thanks and God bless.

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