Sunday, September 3, 2023

What And Why (poem) by me


With first breath we start this  race 

Obstacles of life we have to face 

Full of wonder our curious souls 

Land here and set their  goals 

Whether it is just matter of food 

Or some toughest plans include 

We keep moving through all odds

No matter how much path are hard 

Everything "moving" whether dusk or dawn 

No "stillness" in Nature's plan 

Why all things are made this way ?

What they have to achieve anyway ?

Is this blessing or the curse ?

 After what is universe ?

Why can't things be at the rest ?

Why everyone is after "best"?

What if  being "best" is not the case ?

And we are trapped in delusional phase

What if "game " is not about win

Matter  most  "rules and discipline"?


  1. Oh, your poetry is beautiful and always gives me a lot to think about what is happening to our world. Thanks so much(✿◡‿◡)(✿◕‿◕✿)ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃ

    1. You are too generous dear Ellie
      I really appreciate your encouragement my friend

  2. Replies
    1. When ponder everything seems on journey dear Emma. Why so ?
      Science conclude that it is work in infinitey .if so why and what is the purpose behind it either way

  3. ...have eaten of the tree
of which I commanded you,
    ‘You shall not eat of it,’
cursed is the ground because of you;
    in pain you shall eat of it all the days of your life;
    thorns and thistles it shall bring forth for you;
    and you shall eat the plants of the field.
    Genesis 3:17-18

    Ever since mankind left the garden God made for us, we have worked like this. But it was not this way from the beginning. We were meant to walk with God in the garden forever.

    1. So is this happened after eating from the tree of knowledge dear Sandi .this is what Quran says?

    2. It happened after eating from the tree, yes. I took this passage from the book of Genesis in the Bible. I have heard some of our stories match up, but not all and not always the same way.

      Off topic, but a friend told me Abraham almost sacrificed Ishmael according to the Quran. In the Bible it says it was his second son Isaac.

      Interesting differences!

    3. Ismael or Isaac dear Sandi what matter most that Ibrahim did not hesitate to sacrifice.
      This is sad and unfortunate that we over think about trivial things but forgot the essence of the the divine message that our Creator has bestowed upon his messages and countless other pious men

  4. Everything within universe exist because of certain Balanced conditions without which it was impossible otherwise.
    Does Nature ask us to keep balance to maintain harmony with all creations. Even knowledge must have certain limits and crossing which is curse?

  5. Lots of good questions in this poem. Most people just bumble along through life.

    1. i felt curious since i was child dear Red but i admit that with age this curiosity is taking over my by mind most often ,i try honestly to distract myself with ground realities of this world but i hardly am able to dwell on them for long ,it feels so unlike me as this is not what i should be doing even though i am very practical person in day to day life but when it comes to contemplate in solitude such many question grad me away to the higher parts of cosmos .this is both relaxing at some point but discomforting at the same time

  6. Beautifully expressed, dear Baili! Love this!

    1. thank you dear Marie ,hearing encouragement from person like who's words are always poetic and fascinating is an honor

  7. Yin and Yan, baili.
    Always and forever.
    Have a blessed week

    1. i i am in awe of worlds that works by different laws dear Pedro and conflict between two energies is not the reason behind their existence

  8. Nice poem and a thought provoking one too Baili.

  9. sometimes thoughts get more powerful to appear in such expressions dear Margaret ,thanks ,glad you enjoyed it friend

  10. Um poema que e uma reflexão que devemos fazer sobre nós mesmos, sobre a vida.
    Uma boa semana.
    Um beijo.

  11. How well you right, my dear friend.

  12. A very good poem - great questions.

    All the best Jan


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