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standing all alone,
in busy street of life,
waiting for you ,may will come from any side ,
i am begging for your
one and only smile ,
without any destination though,
running all time ,fast and slow,
do you think me ,during in the race
give me answer ,do not turn your face,
i am melting ,turning into sand ,
have me in hand, and then blow away,
or give me smile , and i will be ok.
Oh Bali this beautiful! For only the cost of a smile all will be ok
ReplyDeleteBaili, this is so nice! It's very heartfelt and sad. Great job on pulling on the emotions!!!
ReplyDeleteThat's a lovely, but sad poem Baili, hope you aren't feeling sad. I have a quote of Mother Theresa on my blog sidebar 'Everytime you smile at someone, it is an action of love, a gift to that person, a beautiful thing." ~Mother Teresa
ReplyDeleteI hope your longing was fulfilled.
ReplyDeleteA smile can do so much.
ReplyDeletebeautiful, poignant
ReplyDeleteA smile is just the most wonderful thing and can mean so much to so many …
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
This is beautiful verse. I agree that it also seems sad. Thanks for posting this.
ReplyDeleteYou don't have to beg, you have the wealth of writing beautiful poetry !!
ReplyDeleteThat is really lovely, Baili! Thank you for sharing it with us xo
ReplyDeleteI feel it, beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, Baili! Wishing you smiles coming to you in all directions.
ReplyDeleteYour poetry is always thoughtful and beautifully stated, baili.
ReplyDeleteWonderful, sensitive poem! ♥
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