Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Waiting For My Son (poem)




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I     am   waiting   for   the   day 

When  just   like  a  sun   ray


Up      above    so     much    high  

You   will    come   from   the   sky :)


Eyes   will    see   your  precious  face !
Your    feet,     will    embrace


   Land   of   my    front   yard
Oh  how    much   Grace   of    my   God 


Will   shower    like   a  rain

Wash   away  distance’s   pain


While   doing    my  house   chore                   

I  will   listen  knock   on   door 


Run    to   open   with   joyous   sure 

Could   I   ask   for   anything   more?


I    will   hug   ,I  will   kiss

I   will   tell   ,how  much  I  missed



There  was  breath   and   heart   beat 

But   every   moment    was  incomplete!



Could   not  see   you   eyes     around

Tick  tock   of  clock  was   giving  us  wound !



May   be   laugh   or  will   cry

Finally   after     a year , sigh!



Tears   of  gratitude   will   rise!

All  my   babies  front  of  eyes!!!


I  will  try   the   time  to  freeze
Through   my  camera ‘s  eye  atleast


  
Soul   will  serene  ,heart   will   dance 

May   each  mom  get   such   chance!

37 comments:

  1. Ahah, he will be here soon mother. Beautiful poem.

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    1. Thank you dear Christine !
      He will by the grace of God !!!

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  2. What a lovely expression of love.

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    1. And I am blessed that God gave me ability to speak my heart and share it with precious friends like you:)

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  3. I can feel your happiness at his approach! It does not seem like a year to me since he left, but to you it probably feels like half a lifetime!

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    1. So true dear Jenny!

      This was longest year of my whole life

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  4. Very nice verse. It is wonderful how important your family is to you. Have a great day!

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    1. Thank you dear Brain!

      What we are without family which justifies our life and gives us support and warmth of love

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  5. beautiful, just absolutely beautiful writing,,

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  6. Oh, Baili, what a beautiful, beautiful poem!

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    1. Thank you dear Laurie and Chris!

      I am genuinely uplifted by receiving appreciation from brilliant artists like you !

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  7. I know you will rejoice when you see your son again, Baili. And I love your words, "heart will dance." This is a lovely poem. Tomorrow is our Thanksgiving, and I'm so very thankful for blog friends like you, Baili.

    ~Sheri

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    1. You are so kind and sweet dear Sheri!either I feel so LUCKY to have you as my friend!

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  8. So beautiful! Thank you for sharing this. Your son will be home soon and I know you are very excited!!!

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    1. Thank you dear Martha!

      I am actually with my heart filled with prays for him!

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  9. This is so lovely, so sweet, and straight from a mother's heart. It will be a joyous homecoming, I am sure. Beautiful poem, dear Baili.

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    1. Thank you dear Connie!

      I believe it will by the grace of God!

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  10. Your heartfelt and lovely poem made me feel your anticipation, hope, and joy! Wishing you the best reunion!

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  11. What a sincere and besutiful podm, straight from your Heart ☺

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    1. Thank you dear Natalia!
      Glad you liked it my friend

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  12. "There was breath and heart beat / But every moment was incomplete!" You have expressed the feeling so very well, baili . . . I know how you feel and I know your reunion with your son will make your heart feel complete again. Big hugs, my dear friend!

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    1. Thank you dear Jenny!

      This was completely spontaneous poem that came in my mind when I sat with laptop .

      I was writing mechanically.
      There is no end to express mother 's feeling who's on is away but one thought hold me strong that he is taking flight that he spose to take in this age to build his future

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  13. This was just beautiful, I loved the words.
    Not long now and he will be home …
    Special family times.

    All the best Jan

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    1. Thank you dear Jan!

      I was counting days for such happy gathering

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  14. They do have special places in our hearts, a lovely poem.
    Merle.........

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    1. Definitely they do dear Merle!

      Place that no one can fill except them!

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  15. Beautiful Baili - always good to have a son coming home. Our youngest son lives at home after being away for 12 years, we love having him here.

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    1. Oh dear Margaret hoy lucky you are to have him back after long twelve years
      I am so happy for you my friend!

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  16. Your love for your first born son comes through very clearly in these words, Baili.

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  17. Oh Baili, that was so sweet!!! :)

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  18. I like your poem, very emotional.

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  19. This is so beautiful Baili! Big Hugs!

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