Hope you know me i am man
playing this game of loss and gain
Tickled by fanciful rituals it has
Running madly within puzzle of maze
In the beginning when i saw
World was rough and life was raw
I was born with curious heart
Always after what i have not
My restlessness made me grew
Always chasing unknown "due"
I created explored and carved
To change older things with new
I opened up ground's crest
To get all what it had pet
Going through hardship so cruel
I obtained raw forms of fuel
I refined and distribute
To lay civilization root
Sea or desert or spooky caves
Always had something to gave
Some metals with value high
As their prices reaching sky
Some naive but of subtle rank
Delved into air as airoplane
When i looked at water untamed
Thought it's needed to be framed
By overcoming it's speed and waste
Controlled it to facilitate
Beautified with bridges and dam
Nothing could stood in my aim
My eyes when saw Forest dark
Realized it's hidden spark
Embellished world with wooden feature
Architecture and furniture
Everything i saw unbaked
Picked it up to trim and shape
I am proud how i advanced
On the rhythm of need when danced
Don't mind if it looks like brag
It has been exhausting drag
Now i wanna feel good and free
Leaving behind all the creeds
Untying humanity from all chains
Unfamiliar of whining or blames
So everyone can follow his heart
By overlooking but ,if ,what
Some say what i did is cool
Though there are some naive fools
Who give preference to "rules"
Talking about "order" and "ques"
What the point in making all" plain"?
When i forgot what is main
They think like a everything else
My mind needs refinement as well
Waking and strengthening Soul
Can be way that lead to goal
Trimming down trees of wish and dream
That are too much wild and extreme
Bringing order in the thoughts
Can save me from hurting others lot
Reconsidering priorities
Can bring earthers lots of ease
I would say it's easiest thing
Teaching others how to sing
But when it's to catch the tune
Sending wild beast to saloon
Conquering world is easier bask
Fighting one's ego is hardest task
Acknowledging own's flaws
Travelling against gravity laws
Can i make this happen ever
Says conscience now or never
Starting war is difficult
Fighting against inner ugly cult
Reigning my head since i am
Ruining the original gem
In the body soul was sowed
To sprout up and grow
From the rock 's core doomed
Gently appear innocent bloom
What i did to thing subtle ?
Imprisoned behind the grill
Grill made up of lust and greed
Despair was her only feed
Can i make her live again ?
To sit on throne of my brain
Making him realize that he
Must understand reality
That his thoughts are "energy"
Like branches out of tree
Growing fearlessly free
That's what energy meant to be ?
Always up to something true
But Oblivious how to do!
It's on soul to show it path
What to choose and what to not
Because brain is body's slave
Captivated in it's cave
Reacting to chemical flee
Carrying orders momentary
Giving physical senses drive
So it's master can survive
But soul is Divine light
To make our paths bright
So we cane walk with care
Balancing "truth" or "dare"
sorry if it got bit long ,just hope you liked it friends !
thank you for bearing with me !
blessings to all of you and loved ones!
Dear Baili …
ReplyDeleteIn the mirror of your words, I see a reflection clear,
A fellow traveler in this world, devoid of fear.
The game of life, we both do play,
Navigating through night and day.
We create, explore, and we carve,
In life's tapestry, our essence we engrave.
Older things, we transform with grace,
Embracing change in this endless chase.
Blessings to you!
John
a big heartfelt thanks dear John for leaving such lovely poems as i wonder if you have written them .
Deletei really find your encouragement generous and great !
i think i could have made my point more clear if had tried harder .
my argument is not about how man has achieved great things and success through the journey of life and gained wisdom gradually by Nature and by learning from our mistakes . Growth is essential sign of life and most important and without it life has no meaning at all indeed.
But i really feel that we are overlooking facts so obvious and "overlooking or avoiding facts makes us regret sooner or later as because of it we take wrong decision make choices unsuitable to our pattern of existence.
Knowing the fact that creation of life and universe is well designed ,well cared and surprisingly perfect for our existence and growth we must acknowledge that although we are unable to find perfect answers and reason for all of this and unable to detect behind the show ,
we must think why in such uniformed world our life don't have certain meaning or reason and to fulfill role assigned to our specie particularly make us more responsible .
If everything in universe appeared raw at first and was treated by us the humans to take it's most acute shape why we human think that we are free of this law ?
and we should not shape ourselves according to Nature's plan rather than changing the laws that are base of whole function that takes place as life within universe .
Why we have to be just as we are ?
why it is bad to train ourselves to be fit in what a healthy society ask for ?
I am concerned about our future as specie because such things make me doubtful and uncertain . i think the One such clever power who can create all is capable to treat us like players who must play by rules .
if i sound stupid or boring i am sorry but sharing with you all makes me easy on blogging
Hi again dear Baili, Reflecting on your reflection: We need to underscore the significance of being aware of the facts and information that pertain to our lives and the decisions we make. Ignorance or avoidance of relevant information can have negative consequences. Informed decisions are more likely to lead to positive outcomes. There is a natural or inherent way of living for humans, and ignoring or avoiding essential facts can lead us away from this natural path. Lastly, one thing of which I am certain: You are NOT stupid or boring, dear Baili, and I truly enjoy the outlook you give us via Baili and I. Wishing you a happy weekend! John
DeleteWell said dear John .My concern is purely about loosing natural path designed for us as humans.
DeleteThanks for kindness you always show in your generous comments. They mean so much to me !
Well done
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteA human's desire to learn and try new things is what has helped us to advance.
ReplyDeletei agree dear Emma
Deletewhile moving further with success and pride we should not forget that like every single thing here who has reason gifted to it by Nature ,we too are obliged to remember our origin and genuine roll as human here
Creator and Destroyer, both.
ReplyDeleteNature 's balance on both is striking dear Debra ,if ponder things are more underlying than obvious ones
Deletewonderful poetry! You said so much about life and its passing. thank you.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. A soul's journey. Blessings to you x K
ReplyDeleteSoul is given to not keep body alive only but to make it grow equally dear Karen . taking the soul along keep our heart gentle and grateful . once we forget soul our bodies dark shallow desire occupy our being and make us do things that are not appropriate sadly
DeleteIt's an interesting poem - well done Baili.
ReplyDeleteLovely words of this poem Baili.
ReplyDeletethank you dear Margaret
Delete... and blessings to you dear Baili.
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
Same here for you dear Jan
ReplyDeleteThe game we used to play when we were young.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week
Truth is that we don't want to acknowledge because it encircle our life with laws
DeleteDare is product of foolishness that born out of our negligence dear Pedro
Escolhemos o caminho e a nossa própria inquietação é que nos anima a continuar sempre. Apesar de tudo e de nada. O seu poema é muito profundo.
ReplyDeleteUma boa semana.
Um beijo.
"Can save me from hurting others lot"
ReplyDeleteOh, Baili. This line. Oh, wow. Yes...God help me that others would not be hurt by me.
Amen!!!
ReplyDeleteI am having light fever and flue since two weeks almost dear Sandi
Sorry for late response my friend
Oh it's great to see your work you give me so much to think on. Thanks for being here thanks for your comment too.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sweet environment dear Ellie ❤
DeleteYou have a wonderful way of putting words together Baili. I am so impressed!
ReplyDeleteI am happy you found my words interesting my dear friend Dennis
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