Monday, February 5, 2018

A Request of Lonely Heart ! ( poem)

  Hey  Lovely  Fellows!

  today  sharing  with  you  one  of my old poem which  i  wrote    and  posted  along  with  happy  new year post on  30th  december  2010 ,i  hope  you  will  like  it .


i am knocking , knocking at the door ,

please open it ,for me little more ,


want to step in ,in your beautiful world ,

let me fly , fly like a bird ,


its been life ,sticking with the nest ,

i did try ,almost gave my best ,


gathered strings and made it very strong ,

felt so tired ,but kept all along ,


wind was often hard on my wings ,

looked for cure ,that your love could bring ,


you been kind ,very nice indeed ,

but do you know ,its not all we need ,


thanks for blanket ,it is quiet warm ,

very warm but ,not like your arm ,


waiting for you under trembling roof

mend it for me ,will be enough proof ,

wont be leaving, it is my nest ,

i am founder, i am not a guest ,


time is running ,life is moving away

lets not waste the ,beauty of moment hey ,


we have many beautiful memories along ,

we can sit and share for very long ,


it is not must, that see each other 's eyes ,

but together, we can look at any side ,

32 comments:

  1. Wonderful verse. I like the idea that sometimes we need more then just a blanket.

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  2. "thanks for blanket ,it is quiet warm ,

    very warm but ,not like your arm "


    I like this part!



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  3. Thanks for sharing your beautiful poem.

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  4. Your poems are always touching! Have a wonderful day!

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  5. Dear Baili, thank you for sharing your poem. It made me think of friendship and love and how we all related to others who help us on our journey through life. Peace.

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  6. Yes indeed, there is a big difference between the help a person can give us and the opening of a person's heart and arms. Lovely thoughts, baili.

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  7. That was lovely Baili :) xxx

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  8. Your poems are always so lovely. I hope you are doing well, dear friend!

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  9. Lovely poem, nothing like a good arm to keep you warm.

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  10. This poem says so much about the need for human companionship and thank you for sharing it with us, Baili. It expresses so many lovely feelings.

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  11. I have happy tears in my eyes. This is full of love and trust and I can feel it being returned as well.

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  12. A very beautifull poem.
    Coming from the heart.
    Have a great week!

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  13. Ah, you are not just a philosopher, you're a poet, too!

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  14. Beautiful poem...

    I love these lines
    time is running ,life is moving away

    lets not waste the ,beauty of moment hey ,

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  15. Good day dear Baili, such lovely verse. Stringing together sweet, longing sentiments - "thanks for blanket ,it is quiet warm , very warm but ,not like your arm ." Be blessed!

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  16. I really enjoyed reading your lovely poem, so nice you share it with us. I love the feeling of a warmth of a blanket but indeed an arm feels better.
    Regards, Janneke

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  17. Very beautiful and so touching! Big Hugs and lots of love!

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  18. Beautiful poem for a new year, being thankful for the past, but looking toward the future and all it will bring. Wishing you all the best and yes looking forward to spring :)
    Thanks for stopping by my blog :)

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  19. Your lovely poem is full of striking images, Baili. "wind was often hard on my wings ,looked for cure ,that your love could bring ," reminded me of how wonderful it was to meet Terry and to be sheltered from the strong winds of life in his loving arms. Don't ever stop writing, my poetic friend!

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  20. Lovely Baili. You are a dear and tender spirit and it shows in your poetry and prose.

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  21. Lovely imagery! Love your positivity!

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  22. So beautiful and touching, dearest Baili!
    Heavens, only now I understood that you have been blogging already since... 2009! And we met only last year! :) Well, I'm so happy we did. I hope to have time to come to read your older posts.
    Wishing you happy days and sending you warm hugs!

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  23. That is a good one..... very warm but ,not like your arm.

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  24. This is a sweet and touching poem. Wishing you all the best!

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  25. what a sweet poem!! loved reading it and glad you shared. I always love to share in others' creative endeavors and poetry is so nice to read from others.

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  26. Beautiful, lovely poem, my dear friend! ♥

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  27. I'm all caught up! I enjoyed rereading this lovely poem. Thanks for not giving up on me and commenting on my blog. I will try not to fall behind again! Sending you a big hug!

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