In awe of the wonders of life
Knitting the baffling motif on the needles of Time
Astound with puzzling pattern, i felt lacked light
I left my comfort zone and looked for place right
It took so long to find some seat higher and bright
But reality i encountered there was so hard to deny
That once you know" what is what" next you think is Why ?
Pondering on the "why" reveals that many truth are lie
Sometimes it's heartbreaking makes you sad and sigh!
Even existence seems unfeasible and you don't want to try
Then what hold you back is only Nature's cozy lap
Everything speaks for the Whom who gives it's shape
Then i feel like a drop of water evaporated from the Sea!
Journeying back slowly due until where i meant to be
Thanks for being with me dear friends
Health ,Peace And Joy to All Of You And To Loved Ones
A wonderful poem, my friend, and yes, you are absolutely right -- we must leave our comfort zones to grow. I especially like your imagery in the line "Knitting the baffling motif on the needles of Time"
ReplyDeleteHeartfelt thanks for for kind words my dear friend Debra!
DeleteIt's been while since i could not write poetry at all.my health issues and then having no laptop made it harder.
I had nothing in mind when sat with laptop. Then started typing and thoughts came along thankfully
God bless you ❤
Lots of food for thought here, Baili. Love it. You have a way with words, my friend.
ReplyDeleteBig thanks for the warm response precious Marie!
DeleteI absolutely love how you describe everything alobg with captivating photos in your posts :)
What a wonderful poem, Baili.
ReplyDeleteTake care and thanks for sharing.
Thanks dear Margaret!
DeleteLovely. It is good to examine your life every now and then. It makes problems seem smaller and easier to deal with.
ReplyDeleteSo true dear mimmylynn
DeleteSometimes we need to step out of the things to figure out the solution
You have the gift, baili.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week
Blessings to you dear Pedro
DeleteI wish you all the same!
ReplyDeleteNice to hear that my friend
DeleteWishing you all the best
Gosto quando encontro aqui um poema. Li com gosto.
ReplyDeleteUma boa semana.
Um beijo.
You are an incredibly talented poet dear Grace
DeleteThank you for your inspiring words.
ReplyDeleteOh this is so generous of you dear Kathy!
ReplyDeleteBaili, you have a wonderful way with words, my friend.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem!
ReplyDeleteLovely to read your words dear Baili.
ReplyDeleteWishing you a happy new month of October.
All the best Jan
You create beautiful and original images, Baili. "Knitting the baffling motif on the needles of Time" ~ brilliant, my friend. I also love the image of you as a drop of water slowly journeying back to where you are meant to be. You continue to inspire me all the time! ❤️ 🙏🏼
ReplyDeleteHello Baili, I do seem to have trouble leaving comments.
ReplyDeleteI hope they are coming through to you okay and not ending up in spam folder.
All the best Jan