It was cold windy evening of January .sky was covered with dark clouds and it seemed that the storm was coming towards the small city . The wind was running madly in the streets like she had lost something so close to it's heart. Lightening was causing the pain to the dull eyes of Sara who was laying in her room . Under the blanket her body was shaky and face was pail . The lack of proper food and sleep made her very weak and dizzy.
Her eyes were still staring at the bare branches of front yard tree which were waving swiftly with the each blow of wind and placing back when it passed away .Under the blanket her body was freezing .Her soul was calling for Robin. Her dried lips seemed like a desert where it did not rain for long . The moment had come so close she waited for desperately .Her suffering will end and she will be in the arms of her love of life.
That thought gave peace to her mind and there raised slight glow in her heavy eyes later that glow turned into the tow glittering pearls which rolled down slowly to the deep dark world of pillow .Pillow that had countless of the same felt her true friend in such situations.
And that night when it was raining heavily with noisy wind Robin came home . His heart hardly beard the shock when he looked at Sara who seemed for a while like a dead body. .He felt that something will burst out in his head .For so long he grabbed her weak body in his strong arms and hugged as tight as he wants to dissolve her in himself .
Oh god how would i heal her wounds ?
This poor soul beard more then her strength because of me .
How could i believe my cruel heartless mother and leave this innocent soul with
i made a huge mistake, oh god please forgive me .
Please forgive me Sara, i am so sorry i put you in trouble its all my fault.
Will you? said Robin with dropping tears .
I promise it will never happen again .he said and pressed his arms around her .
Sara said nothing and her tears said all .Uncle John told everything to Robin .
Although he was broken and wanted to shout and fight yet Robin knew well that saying anything to his mother will make no difference .So next day he announced that soon he and Sara will live in another house .
Helda said so much to Robin about Sara that she is creating everything to make you decide this she is so clever my son don't be fool by her.
Helda blamed that Sara had a lover back in village and she is still in touch with him and writes letter to him .
Doel said that our mother is right Sara is a characterless girl and when i saw her writing letter to his lover she started to black male us and said if you will tell this to Robin i will tore your family .i will snatch away the Robin from you .
Inspite of all this Robin knew his mother and brother very well so he did not believe them .He said that he will give the certain amount of money for the house expenditure every month but will not live here anymore .
He visited to the doctor who advised good food , bed rest and many supplements for Sara .After that Robin took one month leave from office and took great care of Sara which helped her to recover soon.
In the month of May Sara gave birth to a healthy baby boy .The beautiful world of Robin and Sara was complete to have Erik as their first son.
Robin and Sara shifted in an other house which was far from this one and was situated in a quite an expensive area of the city to do so Robin took house loan which he would have to pay in installments within eight years .
Though this loan was cutting from his monthly income and with new baby it was little hard for them to manage yet they were so happy and content because they had each other and it made them so courageous to face all kind of problem with positive approach and healthy attitude towards life .
Sara and Robin were enjoying their time with their son who brightened their world with his lovely smiles and sweet cheerful noises .Sara felt herself so lucky that his creator heard her unsaid prayers and fulfilled her dreams with such calmness and joy .
She did her house chores and look after her baby and if found spare time she read books of her interest or listened music .Sara had few friends from school who were still in touch with her .They mostly wrote letters to each other or called occasionally .
Her one friend told her once that her husband was very loving in the first year of their marriage but since she had a child she felt that he had start spending more time outside the house instead of being with baby and her he is getting away from them and she felt that he did not love her anymore as he used to do before .
Sara felt sorry for her friend and prayed that may she be happy in her married life and find more love of her husband .By hearing all this from her friend Sara did not felt bothered with the fear of that thought that Robin will ever be changed such way because she knew that he was loyal with her when even he was pulled by Neena .
Sara rarely visited her in laws .But they visited her often specially the wife of Robin's younger brother and with each visit of her she could not hide her jealousy that was shown from her eyes and her tongue . Sara did not care what she think for her she still behaved with her lovingly as Sara was true and divine soul of God who loved each creature of her creator always and did not take revenge from someone who hurt them but pray for them to come back on right path and get rid of negativity . Instead of trying to harm them whom God has blessed such people should improve themselves for better ,Sara often thought sadly .
It was a beautiful evening of August 2000 when Sara ,Robin and their three year old son came back from a picnic .Erik slept in his room and Sara and Robin were having coffee in their lawn .Beautiful fragrant of various color of roses freshened their mind .
.Meanwhile rang the phone bell in the lounge .Sara went inside and received call from her mother .When she told her that they both are invited for the marriage ceremony of Neena Sara was surprised and happy to hear this because she thought that may be Neena got tired of being lost in the world of no respect and sense and that is why she has decided to take over to a right path where is a healthy and beautiful life is waiting for her .
to be continued ....
Her eyes were still staring at the bare branches of front yard tree which were waving swiftly with the each blow of wind and placing back when it passed away .Under the blanket her body was freezing .Her soul was calling for Robin. Her dried lips seemed like a desert where it did not rain for long . The moment had come so close she waited for desperately .Her suffering will end and she will be in the arms of her love of life.
That thought gave peace to her mind and there raised slight glow in her heavy eyes later that glow turned into the tow glittering pearls which rolled down slowly to the deep dark world of pillow .Pillow that had countless of the same felt her true friend in such situations.
And that night when it was raining heavily with noisy wind Robin came home . His heart hardly beard the shock when he looked at Sara who seemed for a while like a dead body. .He felt that something will burst out in his head .For so long he grabbed her weak body in his strong arms and hugged as tight as he wants to dissolve her in himself .
Oh god how would i heal her wounds ?
This poor soul beard more then her strength because of me .
How could i believe my cruel heartless mother and leave this innocent soul with
i made a huge mistake, oh god please forgive me .
Please forgive me Sara, i am so sorry i put you in trouble its all my fault.
Will you? said Robin with dropping tears .
I promise it will never happen again .he said and pressed his arms around her .
Sara said nothing and her tears said all .Uncle John told everything to Robin .
Although he was broken and wanted to shout and fight yet Robin knew well that saying anything to his mother will make no difference .So next day he announced that soon he and Sara will live in another house .
Helda said so much to Robin about Sara that she is creating everything to make you decide this she is so clever my son don't be fool by her.
Helda blamed that Sara had a lover back in village and she is still in touch with him and writes letter to him .
Doel said that our mother is right Sara is a characterless girl and when i saw her writing letter to his lover she started to black male us and said if you will tell this to Robin i will tore your family .i will snatch away the Robin from you .
Inspite of all this Robin knew his mother and brother very well so he did not believe them .He said that he will give the certain amount of money for the house expenditure every month but will not live here anymore .
He visited to the doctor who advised good food , bed rest and many supplements for Sara .After that Robin took one month leave from office and took great care of Sara which helped her to recover soon.
In the month of May Sara gave birth to a healthy baby boy .The beautiful world of Robin and Sara was complete to have Erik as their first son.
Robin and Sara shifted in an other house which was far from this one and was situated in a quite an expensive area of the city to do so Robin took house loan which he would have to pay in installments within eight years .
Though this loan was cutting from his monthly income and with new baby it was little hard for them to manage yet they were so happy and content because they had each other and it made them so courageous to face all kind of problem with positive approach and healthy attitude towards life .
Sara and Robin were enjoying their time with their son who brightened their world with his lovely smiles and sweet cheerful noises .Sara felt herself so lucky that his creator heard her unsaid prayers and fulfilled her dreams with such calmness and joy .
She did her house chores and look after her baby and if found spare time she read books of her interest or listened music .Sara had few friends from school who were still in touch with her .They mostly wrote letters to each other or called occasionally .
Her one friend told her once that her husband was very loving in the first year of their marriage but since she had a child she felt that he had start spending more time outside the house instead of being with baby and her he is getting away from them and she felt that he did not love her anymore as he used to do before .
Sara felt sorry for her friend and prayed that may she be happy in her married life and find more love of her husband .By hearing all this from her friend Sara did not felt bothered with the fear of that thought that Robin will ever be changed such way because she knew that he was loyal with her when even he was pulled by Neena .
Sara rarely visited her in laws .But they visited her often specially the wife of Robin's younger brother and with each visit of her she could not hide her jealousy that was shown from her eyes and her tongue . Sara did not care what she think for her she still behaved with her lovingly as Sara was true and divine soul of God who loved each creature of her creator always and did not take revenge from someone who hurt them but pray for them to come back on right path and get rid of negativity . Instead of trying to harm them whom God has blessed such people should improve themselves for better ,Sara often thought sadly .
It was a beautiful evening of August 2000 when Sara ,Robin and their three year old son came back from a picnic .Erik slept in his room and Sara and Robin were having coffee in their lawn .Beautiful fragrant of various color of roses freshened their mind .
.Meanwhile rang the phone bell in the lounge .Sara went inside and received call from her mother .When she told her that they both are invited for the marriage ceremony of Neena Sara was surprised and happy to hear this because she thought that may be Neena got tired of being lost in the world of no respect and sense and that is why she has decided to take over to a right path where is a healthy and beautiful life is waiting for her .
to be continued ....
Hello, greetings and good wishes.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this wonderful love story illustrated with lovely photos.
Very well written.
Best wishes
This post is so lovely and the pics are so mesmerizing...xx
ReplyDeleteHappy for Sara and Robin with their son! Waiting for the next installment.
ReplyDeleteOkay, the beauty of this drew me further in.
ReplyDeletecan't wait for next edition
You have me wondering, but I am guessing the next installment of the story is not good...
ReplyDeleteYou write so well, I am enjoying your story, can't wait to hear what is next!
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad everything turned out well for Sara and Robin, and that their baby was born healthy. Looking forward to more!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story and lovely writing!
ReplyDeleteJane
That is a really lovely story.
ReplyDeleteI'm enjoying the story and I like the images you've used.
ReplyDeleteSo pleased to read about Sara and Robin's baby ...
Looking forward to more of your writing.
All the best Jan
interesting and beautiful
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!! Thank you for leaving me a comment so that I could backlink and FIND you. I am your newest follower. xo Diana
ReplyDeleteLovely post .Awesome pictures
ReplyDeleteNice images.
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful images you've paired with your words... You put so much care into your posts.
ReplyDeleteI am very happy for Sara and Robin.
ReplyDeleteI don't think Neena's journey is finished though.
Happy about the baby boy! Can't wait for more of the story!
ReplyDeleteyou're such a talented writer, baili!
ReplyDeletethis is truly a natural gift for you...never stop sharing. <3
The story drew me in and I'll try and remember to come back for part 2 - very well written and i love the images you chose.
ReplyDeleteAlways enjoy your stories♥
ReplyDeleteThank you for stopping over at my blog yesterday to read AnnMarie's Favorite Things. It's nice to meet you - you are a very beautiful writer!
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear that things are going in the right direction in your story
ReplyDeleteBaili, such a wonderful story and images...I look forward to next writing. Thank you for visiting Thistle Cove Farm, you blessed me.
ReplyDeleteMarvelous writing!
ReplyDeleteYou are an excellent writer. I look forward to reading more of this story.
ReplyDeleteI know a lot of people eats unhealthy. I see it quite a bit on my job.
ReplyDeleteCoffee is on
A bundle of joy as the words and story progressed.
ReplyDeleteIt seems to getting much happier as the story comes to a close. What a great story.
ReplyDeleteHi Baili, Ashley said it correctly in her comment above ... You are very talented. I can tell that writing is your joy. I'm enjoying the story and wondering where it will go next. Just like a good book! Thanks for sharing, Baili, and thanks for your kind comment on my blog. Wishing you a fine week ahead!
ReplyDeleteNice ! :-)
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
Oh thanks for share this original story with us
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed
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well written, Baili :)
ReplyDeleteI’m so happy for Sara, Robin and little Erik and wish the same kind of blessings for Neena.
ReplyDeleteGood morning and what a beautiful prose! Thank you also for coming to visit and leaving me a comment!
ReplyDeletebaili, The 'little squirrels' say "Hi!" to you. ;-) Thank you for coming to visit my blog, too-and leaving a comment!
ReplyDeleteHello Baili, your writing and story are wonderfully written. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteHappy Thursday, enjoy your day and the weekend ahead!
Lindo e muito bem escrito tudo aqui! Obrigado pela visita! abraços, chica
ReplyDeleteI am so glad that Robin is strong to shift out with Sara and live happily together. I hope their happiness will not be destroyed by her in laws or even her own sister.
ReplyDeleteQue historia emocionante,feliz em saber que termina tudo bem..
ReplyDeleteAgradeço a visita no blog, é bem vina volte sempre.. Tenha um ótimo final de semana.
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What a relief, Robin came back safe and sound. I hope Neena will become happy influenced by her sisiter, but looks it will take time, or never?
ReplyDeleteYoko
Thank you very much for your visit and left a comment.
ReplyDeleteI am delighted with your blog. It is beautiful and very interesting.
Greetings from Poland.
Lucja