Neena looked at the weird looking man who was trying to smile may be and his two fore teeth were hovering upon his lower lip. and failing his effort. His small eyes were sharp and fast moving . His face seemed place where his clever attitude played lots of tricky games but remained fruitless due to his low i.q. Neena over a minute decided that she will bear him on her bed if it would be necessary . Dennie was most impressed by her beauty as when he hold her hands for greetings his hands seemed shaky . Neena straighten her neck with pride and thought that he seems easy bite .
In this first meeting Neena knew lot about Dennie .Among them most important was his occupation .He was assistant manager in one of a five star hotel in the city .Dennie told her the plan to make quick money as he was also a supplier of girls for the rich men who came to this hotel in the full mood of enjoying their lives and spending their black money on white girls who brightens their nights and the future of their own...Dennie told her to not waste her beautiful skin in low budget market and cash it on high price at better place where veges are far better then former .
Neena jumped over the chance with excitement and after just two personal meetings with Dennie started to take her along to present her before the different landlords and businessman .Suddenly Neena 's bank account was increasing quickly and Neena who has already start drinking in the company of her customers brought bottles with her at home .Her mother was fearing to death that How to stop Neena from these sins as she was hearing the footsteps of doom creeping towards her.
One day she asked Neena to correct her routine or get married to that man with whom she goes out in nights as people living in surroundings started objecting on them that such lifestyle does not go with the society we live in and such routine of your's is putting bad impact on the modest girls of their houses .At this issue for one day Neena fought with her mother as she was drunk and she used abusive words for neighbors also but later when she thought over the topic she got a fantastic idea to get rid of this depressing environment .
Within a week she convinced Dennie that she likes him and want to marry him as she is tired and wants settle down now .Dennie was not smart enough to smell her intentions or Neena was more clever to trap him it was obvious so soon he gave up before her attractive offer that was not bad he was getting a beautiful wife and handsome bank balance with doing Nothing at all.
He was 37 ,inhabitant of a small town where his father owned a shop . Dennie was lazy in studies and almost in all kind of jobs that required bit of physical or mental effort .He was as mean looking and thin with shaky walk that sometime people thought him an in between creation who is not a man nor a woman.
Though he got a wife by the arrangements of their parents but got no guts to be a support system of her married life .And it was just customs and traditions who kept bounded his wife in his home for almost one year but still instead of she should have asked for separation Dennie left her alone and ran out to another city where he in beginning did many low kinds of job until he found a job as waiter in a small hotel .
Gradually he learnt form other men around him how to take short cuts .His ugliness was biggest hurdle of his way otherwise he thought he would marry to an old and rich woman woman and would live an easy life .But soon he knew that his personality is not attractive at all specially for ladies. Still latter on time taught him his real job that searched him by itself as one day when he was cleaning a table a man sitting one a table blinked his eye to him it was offer for sitting front of him so he sat .That man told him that he is running a business and want him to be part of it .The most interesting part of job for him that it did not required any kind of hard work .And since then he was supplying girls to the men .On each deal he would got a certain amount of the money that girl earned .
Neena was happy to have her targets so closed. She told her mother that she is ready to get marry. Her mother felt peace but along with that peace she also felt threaten by situations that could come up After Neena 's marriage .
Amanda was woman of opportunity and that fact revealed upon her when she felt a change in her attitude that occurred with the financial advancement in their life .Though in beginning she was annoyed with Neena for her very bold life style but later Amanda felt that from inside she is not as angry instead of it she was happy with her changing status in society .She knew that her daughter has became a call girl for the fast progress to live a high profile life and she did not rebel against her as she could have done lot being a mother .She showed her aggressiveness little bit just to notify that Neena could not blame her later if when she realize that being a mother it was her duty to tell her what is wrong and what is right .
Amanda knew very well that Neena is getting marry to not settle down in life but to fulfill her another evil dream. Amanda was glad that her daughter was so clever to use people for her benefit .Deep inside Amanda was flying about that after a long painful and hard life finally God answered her prayers and gave her the life of luxury and respect .Yes Amanda thought that it was God's mercy that he send comfort to her , she did not realized that God has created a circle of Nature and people who live within it lead peaceful life though not luxurious sometime but that who step out of this circle they get lost and luxury cannot give them peace and a calm free of fears conscience ever.
Amanda could not understand that whatever we do chase us whole life until we get it's result and the good or bad effect of this result in our lives to paying it back as by sowing thorns we should not have hope for flowers it is totally completely against the laws of nature.
It was marriage and also time to show their improved status to their relatives back in village and to Sara who was married to a civil servant who brought few thousand monthly and lack many luxury in their life . Neena was excited to see the reaction of Sara when she will come and see her new well decorated house in expensive area of city and brand new luxury car in porch. She could not wait for that moment as she remember that how Sara do all work of house by herself and looked like a maid with her tiring look and cheap dressing .Neena visited her twice since she settled in the city and each time she was improved in her appearances economically .
She did not hide anything from Sara but before telling the stories of her cleverness it was obvious to make Sara realize that how fool and unlucky she is as compare to her .She told her that life is for once and not to spend with just one man who imprisons you between the walls of his house and provides you food and shelter and thinks he has done enough to make you happy . She criticized Sara that She should not be fool with just one sentence that he tells you that he loves you and in return you look after his family and clean his house ,cook for him iron and all other that does not suits you .look at you, you look like a maid when you don't take good care of yourself and don't go even beauty parlor to save his money .
You are such a fool ! Neena said to Sara with pity by waving her soft white hands that were looking very pretty with red shiny shad of nail polish . Sara gave her familiar smile that has calmness of contentment and sweetness of love .She said to Neena that Robin could afford the domestic help but i refused to take because if you remember i always enjoy being busy with house chores
.Everyone has his choice for enjoying his time, ' Sara said calmly , ' i really love doing all this with my own hands it gives me sense of true pleasure,
as this family and this relationship is like a delicate tiny plant for me ,she stopped for a moment, the shine of her eyes deepened and smile on her lips reflected her inner peace she 'i feel that i am watering and nurturing it with my love and attention' she added. it makes me complete .and you know this was my dream nothing more then it .Sara completed her sentence and looked at Neena as she want her to claim her truth.
But Neena insisted that Sara is making a huge mistake by wasting her time and personality like this .Then Neena showed the love letters from that colleague of her's that proposed Neena .Neena told her that this foolish man tried to trap me at one place with his low profile life but see i was clever to say him because i know my value ,she said with great pride 'i am young beautiful and intelligent and with these qualities i can earn more then him without bothering my freedom and soon i will be able to find man of my dreams with luxurious living .
Sara was amazed with her revealings she could not believe that her sister could go as low to achieve her dreams but Sara did not criticized her furiously although she tried to give her some light so she could analyze her sinful life and came back to the world of modesty and dignity .
Sara told her that she is ruining after a mirage and it is nothing but just an illusion .When she will realize the truth of her destruction then there will be no way back for her because it will be too late then .Life is encircled within the laws of nature which are our healthy proper growth physically as well as mentally .They are to protect us from being unbalanced because balance is the base of life and beauty within it . Balance is everything to us to live a peaceful happy life and if we ruin this balance by breaking the laws of nature we get punished sooner or later .Nature never forgive who breaks it's laws.
Neena gave a loud laughter when Sara ended her talk and said carelessly that you are even more fool then i thought Sara and i feel sorry for you .You are stupid and you both make a perfect couple .But listen to me carefully Neena suddenly stopped moving her legs and got up .she came near and stood front of Sara and looked straight in her eyes .That moment Sara felt fear from her Neena seemed stranger to her . She saw something stern in her eyes that made the blood slow in her veins.
Neena said, 'don't you ever give me your useless advises if it makes you feel better then say it in your heart not front of me .She pressed her shoulders with hate on her face and stepped out of the room furiously. .Sara remained in a shock for long while .She still wanted to say to Neena that choosing one partner for whole life is not a stupidity even animals live this way.She wanted to warn her that her beauty and youth will not stay for long and then she will find no one around her to hold her hand and give her his loving companionship .
But all these words remained unsaid as Neena did not give her chance to say anything anymore .
Neena decided to get married immediately and ceremony was in a five star hotel .They invited Sara and Robin and all the relatives from the village .
to be continued....
In this first meeting Neena knew lot about Dennie .Among them most important was his occupation .He was assistant manager in one of a five star hotel in the city .Dennie told her the plan to make quick money as he was also a supplier of girls for the rich men who came to this hotel in the full mood of enjoying their lives and spending their black money on white girls who brightens their nights and the future of their own...Dennie told her to not waste her beautiful skin in low budget market and cash it on high price at better place where veges are far better then former .
Neena jumped over the chance with excitement and after just two personal meetings with Dennie started to take her along to present her before the different landlords and businessman .Suddenly Neena 's bank account was increasing quickly and Neena who has already start drinking in the company of her customers brought bottles with her at home .Her mother was fearing to death that How to stop Neena from these sins as she was hearing the footsteps of doom creeping towards her.
One day she asked Neena to correct her routine or get married to that man with whom she goes out in nights as people living in surroundings started objecting on them that such lifestyle does not go with the society we live in and such routine of your's is putting bad impact on the modest girls of their houses .At this issue for one day Neena fought with her mother as she was drunk and she used abusive words for neighbors also but later when she thought over the topic she got a fantastic idea to get rid of this depressing environment .
Within a week she convinced Dennie that she likes him and want to marry him as she is tired and wants settle down now .Dennie was not smart enough to smell her intentions or Neena was more clever to trap him it was obvious so soon he gave up before her attractive offer that was not bad he was getting a beautiful wife and handsome bank balance with doing Nothing at all.
He was 37 ,inhabitant of a small town where his father owned a shop . Dennie was lazy in studies and almost in all kind of jobs that required bit of physical or mental effort .He was as mean looking and thin with shaky walk that sometime people thought him an in between creation who is not a man nor a woman.
Though he got a wife by the arrangements of their parents but got no guts to be a support system of her married life .And it was just customs and traditions who kept bounded his wife in his home for almost one year but still instead of she should have asked for separation Dennie left her alone and ran out to another city where he in beginning did many low kinds of job until he found a job as waiter in a small hotel .
Gradually he learnt form other men around him how to take short cuts .His ugliness was biggest hurdle of his way otherwise he thought he would marry to an old and rich woman woman and would live an easy life .But soon he knew that his personality is not attractive at all specially for ladies. Still latter on time taught him his real job that searched him by itself as one day when he was cleaning a table a man sitting one a table blinked his eye to him it was offer for sitting front of him so he sat .That man told him that he is running a business and want him to be part of it .The most interesting part of job for him that it did not required any kind of hard work .And since then he was supplying girls to the men .On each deal he would got a certain amount of the money that girl earned .
Neena was happy to have her targets so closed. She told her mother that she is ready to get marry. Her mother felt peace but along with that peace she also felt threaten by situations that could come up After Neena 's marriage .
Amanda was woman of opportunity and that fact revealed upon her when she felt a change in her attitude that occurred with the financial advancement in their life .Though in beginning she was annoyed with Neena for her very bold life style but later Amanda felt that from inside she is not as angry instead of it she was happy with her changing status in society .She knew that her daughter has became a call girl for the fast progress to live a high profile life and she did not rebel against her as she could have done lot being a mother .She showed her aggressiveness little bit just to notify that Neena could not blame her later if when she realize that being a mother it was her duty to tell her what is wrong and what is right .
Amanda knew very well that Neena is getting marry to not settle down in life but to fulfill her another evil dream. Amanda was glad that her daughter was so clever to use people for her benefit .Deep inside Amanda was flying about that after a long painful and hard life finally God answered her prayers and gave her the life of luxury and respect .Yes Amanda thought that it was God's mercy that he send comfort to her , she did not realized that God has created a circle of Nature and people who live within it lead peaceful life though not luxurious sometime but that who step out of this circle they get lost and luxury cannot give them peace and a calm free of fears conscience ever.
Amanda could not understand that whatever we do chase us whole life until we get it's result and the good or bad effect of this result in our lives to paying it back as by sowing thorns we should not have hope for flowers it is totally completely against the laws of nature.
It was marriage and also time to show their improved status to their relatives back in village and to Sara who was married to a civil servant who brought few thousand monthly and lack many luxury in their life . Neena was excited to see the reaction of Sara when she will come and see her new well decorated house in expensive area of city and brand new luxury car in porch. She could not wait for that moment as she remember that how Sara do all work of house by herself and looked like a maid with her tiring look and cheap dressing .Neena visited her twice since she settled in the city and each time she was improved in her appearances economically .
She did not hide anything from Sara but before telling the stories of her cleverness it was obvious to make Sara realize that how fool and unlucky she is as compare to her .She told her that life is for once and not to spend with just one man who imprisons you between the walls of his house and provides you food and shelter and thinks he has done enough to make you happy . She criticized Sara that She should not be fool with just one sentence that he tells you that he loves you and in return you look after his family and clean his house ,cook for him iron and all other that does not suits you .look at you, you look like a maid when you don't take good care of yourself and don't go even beauty parlor to save his money .
You are such a fool ! Neena said to Sara with pity by waving her soft white hands that were looking very pretty with red shiny shad of nail polish . Sara gave her familiar smile that has calmness of contentment and sweetness of love .She said to Neena that Robin could afford the domestic help but i refused to take because if you remember i always enjoy being busy with house chores
.Everyone has his choice for enjoying his time, ' Sara said calmly , ' i really love doing all this with my own hands it gives me sense of true pleasure,
as this family and this relationship is like a delicate tiny plant for me ,she stopped for a moment, the shine of her eyes deepened and smile on her lips reflected her inner peace she 'i feel that i am watering and nurturing it with my love and attention' she added. it makes me complete .and you know this was my dream nothing more then it .Sara completed her sentence and looked at Neena as she want her to claim her truth.
But Neena insisted that Sara is making a huge mistake by wasting her time and personality like this .Then Neena showed the love letters from that colleague of her's that proposed Neena .Neena told her that this foolish man tried to trap me at one place with his low profile life but see i was clever to say him because i know my value ,she said with great pride 'i am young beautiful and intelligent and with these qualities i can earn more then him without bothering my freedom and soon i will be able to find man of my dreams with luxurious living .
Sara was amazed with her revealings she could not believe that her sister could go as low to achieve her dreams but Sara did not criticized her furiously although she tried to give her some light so she could analyze her sinful life and came back to the world of modesty and dignity .
Sara told her that she is ruining after a mirage and it is nothing but just an illusion .When she will realize the truth of her destruction then there will be no way back for her because it will be too late then .Life is encircled within the laws of nature which are our healthy proper growth physically as well as mentally .They are to protect us from being unbalanced because balance is the base of life and beauty within it . Balance is everything to us to live a peaceful happy life and if we ruin this balance by breaking the laws of nature we get punished sooner or later .Nature never forgive who breaks it's laws.
Neena gave a loud laughter when Sara ended her talk and said carelessly that you are even more fool then i thought Sara and i feel sorry for you .You are stupid and you both make a perfect couple .But listen to me carefully Neena suddenly stopped moving her legs and got up .she came near and stood front of Sara and looked straight in her eyes .That moment Sara felt fear from her Neena seemed stranger to her . She saw something stern in her eyes that made the blood slow in her veins.
Neena said, 'don't you ever give me your useless advises if it makes you feel better then say it in your heart not front of me .She pressed her shoulders with hate on her face and stepped out of the room furiously. .Sara remained in a shock for long while .She still wanted to say to Neena that choosing one partner for whole life is not a stupidity even animals live this way.She wanted to warn her that her beauty and youth will not stay for long and then she will find no one around her to hold her hand and give her his loving companionship .
But all these words remained unsaid as Neena did not give her chance to say anything anymore .
Neena decided to get married immediately and ceremony was in a five star hotel .They invited Sara and Robin and all the relatives from the village .
to be continued....
Poor Neena.
ReplyDeleteI love your story thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteLovely post dear!Have a great weekend! xx
ReplyDeleteThis is getting complicated! I had a cousin who was a pimp too for awhile, until he got arrested.
ReplyDeleteif your intention was to tie us in (make us want more), congratulations
ReplyDeleteThe sisters are so different! This story is getting more and more dramatic.
ReplyDeleteWow, I can't believe everything that is happening!!!
ReplyDeleteGood post. NIce pictures
ReplyDeletelove the desert run :)
ReplyDeleteThe story of Sara and her sister continues to fascinate!
ReplyDeleteIf only we lived in a world in which women were equally respected. Too many have to resort to losing their integrity and sometimes lives - for the sake of "survival." I'm hoping Neena and Sara find their way safely through this mess.
ReplyDeletedramatic! I wonder what will happen next...
ReplyDeleteNeena has made her choice to pursue her goal no matter what! Poor girl.
ReplyDeleteyou have me captivated with this wonderful story! Thankyou for sharing with us, I hope you are well, I have so much catching up to do!
ReplyDeleteSuch drama, but such is life, right? Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeletePoppy
The story is getting quite dramatic ...
ReplyDeleteI await the continuation with interest.
All the best Jan
The story is getting quite dramatic ...
ReplyDeleteI await the continuation with interest.
All the best Jan
sobs sobs... poor Neena :(
ReplyDeleteHello, interesting story. Thanks for sharing. Enjoy your day!
ReplyDeleteA very interesting story!
ReplyDeleteHugs
Love the image you chose for Dennie. He looks like a sweet guy. The sisters are so different. Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteA very enjoyable read, you have a way with words.
ReplyDeleteWe will be waiting to see what happens next....
ReplyDeleteCreative post ~ and fun read ~ thanks!
ReplyDeleteWishing you a Happy Week ~ ^_^
So much happening!
ReplyDelete-Kati
Great descriptive sentences.
ReplyDeletethank you for visiting my blog
ReplyDeletebest wishes..
Rosi
your writing is improving so much!!
ReplyDeletethis was a very interesting story...much detail and interesting narrative!
well done, baili!
Hello Baili ... I very much enjoyed reading all this & look forward to the next part. Your writing is wonderful. Thanks so much for your visit & your lovely comment left over on my blog. Julie
ReplyDeleteIt's an interesting story...
ReplyDeleteVery good!! Keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteIt has taken some time to read but I have now caught up with the stories. Thank you for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeletePoor Neena. I think I can see her future.
ReplyDeleteYoko