While Neena was taking her steps to better her destiny through short cuts ,Robin and Sara were living the life of their dreams in the arms of each other .
Their days and nights were encircled by the enchanting spell of love and care for each other .
They were feeling like a pair of birds flying higher and higher into the deep blue heart of unlimited sky where no one is around to bother and they have left all the worries far behind them.Floating above the clouds they were touching the peak of joy and serenity.
It was a September. After long hot summer days were getting normal gradually .Temperature was dropping and it was favorite season of the Sara because in it the weather was pleasant without being much hot or cold. Though rains were rare but whenever they came Sara and Robin enjoyed them together .Robin in such lovely moments dragged Sara out of the room and took her to the top of the roof ,where they get wet as it was special shower of love for them not just an ordinary rain.
Robin knew well that being a village girl Sara would miss her beautiful landscapes during the rains specially .They hold each other and stood under the falling rain unconsciously for long. Those were the moments when their souls seemed to dissolved into each other when they talked much without saying a single word .They felt they have became ONE .It is just the mater of bodies that are being looked as they are separate .this is virtual delusion only , not a Real truth actually .
He tried to give her his all love and affection that his heart kept in it for so long .By going against the rules of his house and society where ladies were treated on secondary positions .Robin pampered Sara like a child . Often he made her tea or meal . When everyday he returned from office he found Sara waiting for him eagerly .He loved the shine that jumps into her eyes when she saw him and It always made him happiest man in the whole world .
So it was September when Sara came to know that she is three months pregnant. First that news feared Sara her worries and concerns were so many .But she also felt that it was a huge blessing for her beyond her imagination. It was hard to believe that she will be given another human being through herself .Sensations amazed and enthralled her nerves. .
It was the most precious gift that she received from her love of life .She felt a strange strength inside her as Robin ' s soul stepped in her body .These were precious feelings difficult to define .
Robin felt out of the world when he heard that Sara is expecting . It was most rich and amazing day for him. He thought that How lucky i am ! I have a woman that i love and now our baby will complete our beautiful world .The sense of gratefulness made his eyes wet. He felt fortunate and it made him more loving for Sara .It seemed that he wanted to keep her in his heart to protect her from all miseries.
Robin had a government job and according to rules he also had to joined the civil defense force during his job . Such selected officers had to join a one month training along real army officials and soldiers to learn how to during the war times they have to help the civilians and how to use arms if necessary .
In the last week of November Robin received invitation letter to join the training in the city quite far from their own city .It was the letter from army and could not be ignored .Robin had to go for it anyway . Sara felt terrible to hear this cried silently because she knew that Robin must leave with peace without thinking about her worries and tears .
Sara felt as some scratchy hands tearing her heart while she said goodbye to Robin .When she was returning to home from airport she felt her heart very empty and hollow .All the world moving around her was foggy and meaningless . She was praying for the well being of Robin though deep inside her heart something was alerting her about her own safety .
Robin was like shelter to her who saved her from all the pains and suffering that her mother in law Helda wanted to cause to her. Her burning eyes were terrifying her soul .
That night Sara could not sleep .Her body and soul were restless .She looked with grief and pain at the pillow of Robin .Her strong wish to be with Robin playing tricks to her imagination .She felt many times as Robin is laying beside her along with his lovely smile and love showering eyes .She could not stop herself to cry for long .She hold his pillow tightly against her chest and felt bit peace .She kissed it madly as if it was Robin himself .
At one moment she realized that Robin will be sad if he found out that i was crying as much and could not keep my promise to be strong after him and meet him healthy and happy at his return. Meanwhile she remembered the concern of Helda that she showed front of Robin for her and made him sure that she will take good care of Sara in his absence .It was last lonely morning star shining in the sky when Sara fell asleep finally .
Next morning she got up with the loud noise of utensils in the kitchen .She saw at the clock it was hardly 8 am . She could sleep for hardly three hours .She tried to go back to sleep but the terrible noise from kitchen near her room did not let it happen.Her head was aching badly .She gave up her efforts for resting and got up from her bed. She went to bathroom to take bath so she can feel better but there was no water in tap.When she came out and went to ask about it from Helda who seemed back in her evil form as she was picking up and putting down madly that was creating horrible noise in the house . Her eyes hit Sara like stones or burning coals .Sara felt fright crept in her blood.
Sara tried to look normal and asked, '' mom should i switch on the water pump i think tank is empty because water is not coming from tap'?
Helda pretended for a while as she did not hear Sara later she replied carelessly '.No you don't need to do this i will check it myself. Sara 's sixth sense warned her that this month will be quite a test for her because Helda is in full mood to make her suffer with each little thing she has control over. But Sara promised to herself that she will not inform the Robin because he will be upset and might be try to come back and by doing so could be punished by army as it was against their rules .
And days that came by Helda proved that she has no fear of God .No fear of loosing her own grandchild or causing pain in the life her own beloved son Robin. She tried to broke Sara in every way .This month showed her real cruel face to Sara that she used to only imagine before .Sara was not allowed to take bath ,she was not allowed to used drink filter water for drinking .Sara secretly boiled the water taken from Jeena 's bath room and used it for drinking ,
Her health was dropping down quickly due to lack of food.She was given only half cup of tea in the morning with a tiny piece of cake of cheap quality. In lunch she was given one small bread with gravy of pulse or potato .Dinner was a single bowl of white rice often without salt.
But above all that caused Sara most damage was her lack of sleep .It was the extreme hate of Helda that she did not let her sleep in nights .When everybody else was at rest in his room in nights Helda stayed close to the window of Sara's room .She would stare at Sara as she is frightening her to death and if inspite of all this Sara would fell in sleep Helda would create a sudden loud noise by dropping something heavy on the ground and Sara would woke up horridly .To avoid this Sara tried to keep the window shut but Helda removed the locks of it ,she also spoiled the lock of door too and now there was no way for Sara to escape from the horror of her mother in law.
It was shocking that in this whole big family there was no one to raise his voice against the sins and cruelties of Helda . Though the wife of Robin's younger brother Jeena Pretend to be sympathetic with Sara but Sara realized that she was also enjoying the pain of her because Jeena 's husband was not loyal and faithful towards Jeena and flirted with Jeena's younger sister so love of Robin for Sara made her a huge jealous with her .Though all were at the side of Helda except her husband John .the uncle of Sara .
But Helda was since beginning beyond control of John .She was an orphan who brought up in the house of her uncle who already had four kids elder then Helda ,That family treated Helda like a slave ..She beard inhuman behavior of them for years and may be it made her such selfish and heartless or she had some kind of inherited gene of cruelty already . John 's parents brought Helda as wife of John and since then the humble and gentle John was facing her worsens in his life. She always dishonored him front of his own children and abused him for being less earner .She was so materialistic and so heartless to be a caring mother for her kids.
Robin was the only man in the house who earned more then others .Helda was enjoying her luxury life until the Sara came in otherwise Helda did not want Robin to get married . she wanted him to stay single and give all his income in her hands. But Sara ruined all her dreams.Now Helda also could not bear the loving attitude of robin towards Sara as it was her weak point the thing that she never had in her life she could not see in the lives of people around her .
Now Helda and his eldest son Doel who was just like her made the plan to throw Sara out of Robin's life and it was possible only when Sara leave the house with her own will because they knew very well that Robin will not leave her at any cost.So they gave her toughest time of her life .Sara became so weak ,.Her physical and mental health were critical . She felt fainted all the time .The biggest fear of her was that it can cause harm to her expected child .
But in all such situations she remained unshaken and made herself to survive just because she believed that Robin loves her so much ,sooner or latter time will be passed and he will be back.And the moment she will see him her wounds will heal.Her all pains will leave .
And she will be safe and cozy in his arms.
To be continued
Their days and nights were encircled by the enchanting spell of love and care for each other .
They were feeling like a pair of birds flying higher and higher into the deep blue heart of unlimited sky where no one is around to bother and they have left all the worries far behind them.Floating above the clouds they were touching the peak of joy and serenity.
It was a September. After long hot summer days were getting normal gradually .Temperature was dropping and it was favorite season of the Sara because in it the weather was pleasant without being much hot or cold. Though rains were rare but whenever they came Sara and Robin enjoyed them together .Robin in such lovely moments dragged Sara out of the room and took her to the top of the roof ,where they get wet as it was special shower of love for them not just an ordinary rain.
Robin knew well that being a village girl Sara would miss her beautiful landscapes during the rains specially .They hold each other and stood under the falling rain unconsciously for long. Those were the moments when their souls seemed to dissolved into each other when they talked much without saying a single word .They felt they have became ONE .It is just the mater of bodies that are being looked as they are separate .this is virtual delusion only , not a Real truth actually .
He tried to give her his all love and affection that his heart kept in it for so long .By going against the rules of his house and society where ladies were treated on secondary positions .Robin pampered Sara like a child . Often he made her tea or meal . When everyday he returned from office he found Sara waiting for him eagerly .He loved the shine that jumps into her eyes when she saw him and It always made him happiest man in the whole world .
So it was September when Sara came to know that she is three months pregnant. First that news feared Sara her worries and concerns were so many .But she also felt that it was a huge blessing for her beyond her imagination. It was hard to believe that she will be given another human being through herself .Sensations amazed and enthralled her nerves. .
It was the most precious gift that she received from her love of life .She felt a strange strength inside her as Robin ' s soul stepped in her body .These were precious feelings difficult to define .
Robin felt out of the world when he heard that Sara is expecting . It was most rich and amazing day for him. He thought that How lucky i am ! I have a woman that i love and now our baby will complete our beautiful world .The sense of gratefulness made his eyes wet. He felt fortunate and it made him more loving for Sara .It seemed that he wanted to keep her in his heart to protect her from all miseries.
Robin had a government job and according to rules he also had to joined the civil defense force during his job . Such selected officers had to join a one month training along real army officials and soldiers to learn how to during the war times they have to help the civilians and how to use arms if necessary .
In the last week of November Robin received invitation letter to join the training in the city quite far from their own city .It was the letter from army and could not be ignored .Robin had to go for it anyway . Sara felt terrible to hear this cried silently because she knew that Robin must leave with peace without thinking about her worries and tears .
Sara felt as some scratchy hands tearing her heart while she said goodbye to Robin .When she was returning to home from airport she felt her heart very empty and hollow .All the world moving around her was foggy and meaningless . She was praying for the well being of Robin though deep inside her heart something was alerting her about her own safety .
Robin was like shelter to her who saved her from all the pains and suffering that her mother in law Helda wanted to cause to her. Her burning eyes were terrifying her soul .
That night Sara could not sleep .Her body and soul were restless .She looked with grief and pain at the pillow of Robin .Her strong wish to be with Robin playing tricks to her imagination .She felt many times as Robin is laying beside her along with his lovely smile and love showering eyes .She could not stop herself to cry for long .She hold his pillow tightly against her chest and felt bit peace .She kissed it madly as if it was Robin himself .
At one moment she realized that Robin will be sad if he found out that i was crying as much and could not keep my promise to be strong after him and meet him healthy and happy at his return. Meanwhile she remembered the concern of Helda that she showed front of Robin for her and made him sure that she will take good care of Sara in his absence .It was last lonely morning star shining in the sky when Sara fell asleep finally .
Next morning she got up with the loud noise of utensils in the kitchen .She saw at the clock it was hardly 8 am . She could sleep for hardly three hours .She tried to go back to sleep but the terrible noise from kitchen near her room did not let it happen.Her head was aching badly .She gave up her efforts for resting and got up from her bed. She went to bathroom to take bath so she can feel better but there was no water in tap.When she came out and went to ask about it from Helda who seemed back in her evil form as she was picking up and putting down madly that was creating horrible noise in the house . Her eyes hit Sara like stones or burning coals .Sara felt fright crept in her blood.
Sara tried to look normal and asked, '' mom should i switch on the water pump i think tank is empty because water is not coming from tap'?
Helda pretended for a while as she did not hear Sara later she replied carelessly '.No you don't need to do this i will check it myself. Sara 's sixth sense warned her that this month will be quite a test for her because Helda is in full mood to make her suffer with each little thing she has control over. But Sara promised to herself that she will not inform the Robin because he will be upset and might be try to come back and by doing so could be punished by army as it was against their rules .
And days that came by Helda proved that she has no fear of God .No fear of loosing her own grandchild or causing pain in the life her own beloved son Robin. She tried to broke Sara in every way .This month showed her real cruel face to Sara that she used to only imagine before .Sara was not allowed to take bath ,she was not allowed to used drink filter water for drinking .Sara secretly boiled the water taken from Jeena 's bath room and used it for drinking ,
Her health was dropping down quickly due to lack of food.She was given only half cup of tea in the morning with a tiny piece of cake of cheap quality. In lunch she was given one small bread with gravy of pulse or potato .Dinner was a single bowl of white rice often without salt.
But above all that caused Sara most damage was her lack of sleep .It was the extreme hate of Helda that she did not let her sleep in nights .When everybody else was at rest in his room in nights Helda stayed close to the window of Sara's room .She would stare at Sara as she is frightening her to death and if inspite of all this Sara would fell in sleep Helda would create a sudden loud noise by dropping something heavy on the ground and Sara would woke up horridly .To avoid this Sara tried to keep the window shut but Helda removed the locks of it ,she also spoiled the lock of door too and now there was no way for Sara to escape from the horror of her mother in law.
It was shocking that in this whole big family there was no one to raise his voice against the sins and cruelties of Helda . Though the wife of Robin's younger brother Jeena Pretend to be sympathetic with Sara but Sara realized that she was also enjoying the pain of her because Jeena 's husband was not loyal and faithful towards Jeena and flirted with Jeena's younger sister so love of Robin for Sara made her a huge jealous with her .Though all were at the side of Helda except her husband John .the uncle of Sara .
But Helda was since beginning beyond control of John .She was an orphan who brought up in the house of her uncle who already had four kids elder then Helda ,That family treated Helda like a slave ..She beard inhuman behavior of them for years and may be it made her such selfish and heartless or she had some kind of inherited gene of cruelty already . John 's parents brought Helda as wife of John and since then the humble and gentle John was facing her worsens in his life. She always dishonored him front of his own children and abused him for being less earner .She was so materialistic and so heartless to be a caring mother for her kids.
Robin was the only man in the house who earned more then others .Helda was enjoying her luxury life until the Sara came in otherwise Helda did not want Robin to get married . she wanted him to stay single and give all his income in her hands. But Sara ruined all her dreams.Now Helda also could not bear the loving attitude of robin towards Sara as it was her weak point the thing that she never had in her life she could not see in the lives of people around her .
Now Helda and his eldest son Doel who was just like her made the plan to throw Sara out of Robin's life and it was possible only when Sara leave the house with her own will because they knew very well that Robin will not leave her at any cost.So they gave her toughest time of her life .Sara became so weak ,.Her physical and mental health were critical . She felt fainted all the time .The biggest fear of her was that it can cause harm to her expected child .
But in all such situations she remained unshaken and made herself to survive just because she believed that Robin loves her so much ,sooner or latter time will be passed and he will be back.And the moment she will see him her wounds will heal.Her all pains will leave .
And she will be safe and cozy in his arms.
To be continued
Oh dear. Helda is such an evil person. I hope Robin stays safe in the army.
ReplyDeleteI hope Robin returns safely.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next installment
ReplyDeleteI too hope Robin returns safely ...
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
I hope Robin is home soon!
ReplyDeletewow great story love from Poland
ReplyDeleteyou have a great eye for images suiting your story.
ReplyDeleteToday's post started with such deep love and followed by so much evil. I hope Sara and her baby stay safe till Robin's safe return to protect them from his evil mother.
ReplyDeleteGreat post. Keep it up
ReplyDeleteHello, great images and story. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day and week ahead!
ReplyDeleteGreat story. I want to read more to see what happens next. :) Hugs-Erika
ReplyDeleteGreat story. I want to read more to see what happens next. :) Hugs-Erika
ReplyDeleteI've only started reading your family saga, but this had me gripped. It reminds me of being a teenager when only read romance novels, I especially enjoyed Mills and Boon. I'll defiantly be continuing to follow, and I can't wait for the next installment. Till next time.
ReplyDeletea deep, intense love....entangled with evil!! beautiful illustrations!!!
ReplyDeleteLove your new "chapter" and the photos that go with it are wonderful! So when do you publish this??
ReplyDeleteThank you Jeanne dear.
DeleteI don't think I am as establish writer who can think about publishing her work.
This is a real story that i am trying to share with my friends with the my bound usage of language and though trying to make better but don't like this
Thank you Jeanne dear.
DeleteI don't think I am as establish writer who can think about publishing her work.
This is a real story that i am trying to share with my friends with the my bound usage of language and though trying to make better but don't like this
Interesting true story. Can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteLovely post dear!Have a great weekend! xx
ReplyDeleteI feel so sorry for Sara. Helda sounds horrible. And what's even worse is that nobody is stepping in to protect her. I hope Robin returns home very soon!
ReplyDeleteWow lovely post dear :) Lots of Love from Switzerland :)
ReplyDeleteEagerly waiting what will happen next...
ReplyDeleteI do love me Autumn stories
ReplyDeleteBoa tarde, parabéns pela sua criatividade, construiu uma historia interessante a cativante para saber o seu final.
ReplyDeleteBoa semana,
AG
Great story so far!
ReplyDeleteWonderful story and lovely images.
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ReplyDeleteInteresting story !
ReplyDeleteI love the first photo !
Greetings
With your words, you've definitely painted a picture for us readers....
ReplyDeleteThank you dear for your precious words
DeleteYou write a very interesting story, I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteYou are a very creative writer and I enjoyed the stories..Thank you so much for stopping by my nature blog...Michelle
ReplyDeleteThis is so sad! I do hope everything works out right!
ReplyDeleteHi, great story, but I've just arrived and will have to start from the beginning! :-)
ReplyDeleteHope you will like it dear and share your opinion about the life style of both sisters
DeleteSo sad. How can a person be so cruel, especially to the woman carrying her own grandchild?!
ReplyDeleteYes Bethany she was as heartless that once her another daughter in law was crying with labor pains and shouting for help as she was alone in the house and only Helda was there but she refused to help her and enjoyed the pain and cries of her daughter in law and in result she gave birth to a dead child that day and Helda did not show any shame for her crime
DeleteYes Bethany she was as heartless that once her another daughter in law was crying with labor pains and shouting for help as she was alone in the house and only Helda was there but she refused to help her and enjoyed the pain and cries of her daughter in law and in result she gave birth to a dead child that day and Helda did not show any shame for her crime
DeleteI believe that in spite of living far away from each other, the minds of Robin and Sara are united, experiencing each one’s tough time and praying for each other. True love can survive.
ReplyDeleteYoko
Sure,
Deletethey were the lovers who touched each other 's soul .their love was beyond bodies and time proved it
Nice story, you are gifted.
ReplyDeleteSome people sure are evil, captured that well indeed. The images were a great touch as well and fit right in.
ReplyDeleteThank you, getting such kind words is an honor as i am fan of your wonderful writings
DeleteMine is quit raw to share this but can't wait until I will be able to fix it
Awww young love and the anticipation of your first child coming. I know the feeling of having my husband have to go away, but thankfully I had a very nice mother in law that showed me love and caring
ReplyDeleteThank you Conniecrafter .
DeleteGlad that you had such loving mother in law mine was not both of them not cruel nor loving .but she was easiy to live with though
Thank you Conniecrafter .
DeleteGlad that you had such loving mother in law mine was not both of them not cruel nor loving .but she was easiy to live with though
Uma história incrÃvel, e imagens lindas!
ReplyDeleteEu quero crer que no final Robin e Sara consigam ser felizes! E que o seu amor vença todas as barreiras!
Grata pela sua carinhosa presença no meu blogue, em artandkits.blogspot.com
E sempre que me for possÃvel, aqui estarei! Adorei o seu blog!
Beijinhos! Continuação de uma boa semana!
Ana
Uma história incrÃvel, e imagens lindas!
ReplyDeleteEu quero crer que no final Robin e Sara consigam ser felizes! E que o seu amor vença todas as barreiras!
Grata pela sua carinhosa presença no meu blogue, em artandkits.blogspot.com
E sempre que me for possÃvel, aqui estarei! Adorei o seu blog!
Beijinhos! Continuação de uma boa semana!
Ana
I wish i can understand your words dear Ana but language berrier you know .
DeleteI will soon manage to put translator here
I wish i can understand your words dear Ana but language berrier you know .
DeleteI will soon manage to put translator here
I do wish the best for Robin and Sara. Hope the mother in law gets a little nicer eventually!
ReplyDeleteThank you Theresa but people with deep ignorance take it as insulting if one point out their bad attitude and ask to change for better ,they become worse by the time
DeleteThank you Theresa but people with deep ignorance take it as insulting if one point out their bad attitude and ask to change for better ,they become worse by the time
DeleteThank you Theresa but people with deep ignorance take it as insulting if one point out their bad attitude and ask to change for better ,they become worse by the time
DeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteI come to thank the visit to my poetry space.
thank you!
kiss
:)
I have finally caught up with this episode and the previous episode. Thank you for calling on my blog .
ReplyDeleteThank you Vest, I am glad that you are liking my effort inspite of all it's flaws
DeleteIts so sad....
ReplyDeleteHello, thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeletePoor Sara to have such a horrible mother in law! My own mother in law is not a very nice lady but I don’t have to live with her so it is not so bad.
I’ve just read your ‘about me’ section and agree, happiness does come from within.
Thank you Barbra ,
DeleteActually this story of two sisters inspired me because we saw both of them chaising their dream in completely different way ,they both suffered with various situations and faced them in totally opposite manner.
How did they get the destinations of their desires and what they felt about this journey is a huge lesson of life for me .
Glad that you have option dear but still in Asian countries less women are as lucky
Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDelete-Kati
Hello Baili, I just read through the last two segments about the lives of the two sisters. Your wisdom about life shines through this story. I would be interested to know your age as this kind of wisdom does not usually come so early in life. I love the way you let us read a little bit “between the lines.” Now I am curious about John, the uncle. Since we share the name I hope he turns out to be a kind person. Thank you for sharing your writing. Also, thank you for your kind comments on my blog. Hope to see you often!
ReplyDeleteHi Jhon,
DeleteI will take your words as compliment thank you so much that you found my story as nice.
I don't know whether I am wise or fool but in the forty five years of my life I learnt well about myself that i am very sensitive and humble woman who have deep faith in her creator and in herself.
I don't classify people on the base of their color ,lifestyle or part of land they occupy.
I completely hate racism and boundaries.
I think everyone has equal right to live and enjoy .
To choose his goal and struggle to achieve them.but on way in his journey he or she should stay fair in her commitments and may not pull any one down in these efforts.
I start writing poetry and short prose in native language since I was eight.
In 2009 when my school going son made me this blog and said to write online journal.
That time i was feeling quite lonely and this little space by Google proved a window to my life that refreshed my way of thinking and to get bettr in English I started my studies and completed my my master degree four years ago.
Being single woman in house who does all by herself including helping kids in studies doesn't allow me to read regularly still I am trying to better my writing skills hope may be someday I will be able to publish my work .
Sorry I forgot to tell about the character of this story uncle John who has since beginning sympathy for his wife as she lived in crucial circumstances before coming in his life .but gradually he revealed that Helda would never change inspite his all love because she is basically a cruel and greedy person who can go to any extent to achieve her goal ,she behaved with John really mean when found him a person who leads a life hand to mouth .
DeleteJohn is a man with no courage to interrupt her or take any step to protect Sara from her harm.
We become what we think of ourselves and I think he thought himself a coward man
Hi! Baili! Thank you so much for commenting on my blog.
ReplyDeleteI really appreciate. I hope we'll see each other again soon.
Great story!
hugs
Nina
Grazie della tua visita un caro saluto!
ReplyDeleteYour words are moving and powerful.
ReplyDeleteThankyou for visiting my blog :-)