Neena was very fun loving person and that made her popular among Sara's in laws.But it did not upset Sara .She was gradually feeling a soft corner deep inside her heart for Robin but these feelings were hidden and Robin knew nothing about this change .
After Neena came here there were lots of exciting gatherings among youngsters of family and they play ludo or chess with loud laughter singing and chats .Sometime Neena played badminton with Robin's younger brother or sister and while it elders in the house were just look at them furiously because the society they belong to young girls have to behave in certain way which had to be sober sophisticated serious and modest .
Before their marriage girls were not allowed to behave so boldly, they must put on scarf on their head and avoid talking to other mails except their own father brothers or close uncles .One thing was strange that Helda who was famous for her criticism she was gentle to Neena and never objected on Neena 's any act .Actually she was happy that Neena due to her bold nature can create problems between the relationship of Robin and Sara .And if it was so ,Helda would be the happiest for she hated Sara for her simple beauty and humble nature which attracted Robin towards her .
Robin and Sara used to have their evening tea together in their room on the table beside the window, from where they looked at the plant rows and tree .They talked little while sipping their tea and if there were they were of various topics of common interests like books and music or sharing views on different aspects of life .Without mentioning any personal emotion for each other they enjoyed these sittings and secretly wanted them last for so long.Their love for each other was increasing every day but there was one beerier between and it was Sara 's cold reaction on Robin's any personal expression of love.
Since Neena came here she mostly rushed into their room on such times and destroyed their enchanted spell of silent love .Neena deliberately often dragged Robin out of the room and forced him to join her gathering which Sara used to avoid because she was shy and liked to be alone most of time.
One day when it was Sunday and Robin was shaving front of the mirror attached to the yard's wall while Sara was cutting cabbage sitting on wooden board laid down in front yard .Neena was doing her home work on the same board.She suddenly took her black ballpoint and got near to Sara .
Neena took knife from Sara's hand put it down and started drawing lines on Sara's face .Sara beard her all such stupidities and said nothing just because she thought that her words might had hurt Neena as she is living in her house that is why Sara is insulting her as she loved her sister so much and never wanted to hurt her .
After drawing lines Neena dragged Sara towards the mirror where Robin was shaving >Neena was laughing loudly while doing this and showed Sara 's her face in mirror and said "look how funny she is looking ",Sara saw her face was messed up .Neena draw mustache ,circle around her eyes and cheeks .Sara tried hard to keep her eyes dried and smiled ,Helda gave laughter from kitchen and same did the Doel ."What are you thinking about it Robee ? dont you find it funny ?"Neena asked Robin who struggled hard to give little laughter .though he said noting and walked into the bathroom and locked the door .
It was Sara's maturity that since beginning she beard Neena's such behavior .She never objected on her humiliating behaviors and now when due to hard circumstances Neena was living in her house Sara was more careful thought hurt because she thought that Neena should avoid such foolishness in front of other people.She felt that Neena mostly try to drive Robin away and Robin inevitably join her .But Inspite of all Sara did not feel insecure because she believed that it was test for Robin's love .If he fails she will leave this house silently and if he passes she will be his partner for all coming seasons of life.She was not afraid of the beauty and intelligence of her little sister .
When she was alone she cried often ,She wanted to be with her husband but boundaries set by her own fears were making it impossible for her.Many nights when she wokeup she wanted to awake and say Robin that come and sleep beside me on bed but it remained just a feared thought .Often she wanted to hug him when he said goodbye for office but instead of hugging him she suddenly piked up the trey and left room immediately .It was war inside her and she had fear to loose it sometimes.
Helda realized distance between Sara and Robin though she did not know the reason but she wanted to take advantage of this situation and encouraged Neena to be near with Robin .Neena hated their love story when she saw that Robin was completely unimpressed by her beauty and joined her just to please Sara .She felt helpless and her hatred arose in her heart for her sister.Neena always thought of Sara as a just ordinary girl with stupid ideas of life .When she realized that Robin is not responding as she expected she started to make fun of both husband and wife without thinking of their great efforts for her and her mom .
She often said in gatherings that these two fools are made for each other and both are of ordinary appearances and of stupid way of thinking ,always indulging in What is Good and What is Bad blah blah what a rubbish ..Neena often said to Sara that your husband is so ugly how do you get so close to him?
Sometime to she tried to make Robin suspicious in the eyes of Sara and asked her that did you noticed the way Robby was looking at me ? or did you see i asked for one thing and look he brought so many gifts for me ,ahh i know he likes me so much but not allowed to flirt with me sis as he is very afraid of you she said shamelessly .And in reply Sara always gave a calm smile which made Neena more furious .
Neena lived with them for two years and this era proved test for their silent but deep love .Neena 's mother who witnessed all silently because she knew the level of the patience of Sara and disturbing behavior of her little daughter .When Neena finished her matriculation her mother wanted her to get married with some nice boy but Neena had high expectations from life her dreams and desires were far greater then Sara's.
She left Sara's house and went to a city near her native village .She started to look for job and found one as phone operator in a small private office .Her mom was very concerned about her attitude because she knew that Neena is going against the rules of her society and tried hard to guide her towards right path but invain.Neena was ready to take flight towards her dream world.
to be continued
Dear friends sorry for late post as my eldest son came just for three days to celebrate yearly festival Eid.
God Bless You All
After Neena came here there were lots of exciting gatherings among youngsters of family and they play ludo or chess with loud laughter singing and chats .Sometime Neena played badminton with Robin's younger brother or sister and while it elders in the house were just look at them furiously because the society they belong to young girls have to behave in certain way which had to be sober sophisticated serious and modest .
Before their marriage girls were not allowed to behave so boldly, they must put on scarf on their head and avoid talking to other mails except their own father brothers or close uncles .One thing was strange that Helda who was famous for her criticism she was gentle to Neena and never objected on Neena 's any act .Actually she was happy that Neena due to her bold nature can create problems between the relationship of Robin and Sara .And if it was so ,Helda would be the happiest for she hated Sara for her simple beauty and humble nature which attracted Robin towards her .
Robin and Sara used to have their evening tea together in their room on the table beside the window, from where they looked at the plant rows and tree .They talked little while sipping their tea and if there were they were of various topics of common interests like books and music or sharing views on different aspects of life .Without mentioning any personal emotion for each other they enjoyed these sittings and secretly wanted them last for so long.Their love for each other was increasing every day but there was one beerier between and it was Sara 's cold reaction on Robin's any personal expression of love.
Since Neena came here she mostly rushed into their room on such times and destroyed their enchanted spell of silent love .Neena deliberately often dragged Robin out of the room and forced him to join her gathering which Sara used to avoid because she was shy and liked to be alone most of time.
One day when it was Sunday and Robin was shaving front of the mirror attached to the yard's wall while Sara was cutting cabbage sitting on wooden board laid down in front yard .Neena was doing her home work on the same board.She suddenly took her black ballpoint and got near to Sara .
Neena took knife from Sara's hand put it down and started drawing lines on Sara's face .Sara beard her all such stupidities and said nothing just because she thought that her words might had hurt Neena as she is living in her house that is why Sara is insulting her as she loved her sister so much and never wanted to hurt her .
After drawing lines Neena dragged Sara towards the mirror where Robin was shaving >Neena was laughing loudly while doing this and showed Sara 's her face in mirror and said "look how funny she is looking ",Sara saw her face was messed up .Neena draw mustache ,circle around her eyes and cheeks .Sara tried hard to keep her eyes dried and smiled ,Helda gave laughter from kitchen and same did the Doel ."What are you thinking about it Robee ? dont you find it funny ?"Neena asked Robin who struggled hard to give little laughter .though he said noting and walked into the bathroom and locked the door .
It was Sara's maturity that since beginning she beard Neena's such behavior .She never objected on her humiliating behaviors and now when due to hard circumstances Neena was living in her house Sara was more careful thought hurt because she thought that Neena should avoid such foolishness in front of other people.She felt that Neena mostly try to drive Robin away and Robin inevitably join her .But Inspite of all Sara did not feel insecure because she believed that it was test for Robin's love .If he fails she will leave this house silently and if he passes she will be his partner for all coming seasons of life.She was not afraid of the beauty and intelligence of her little sister .
When she was alone she cried often ,She wanted to be with her husband but boundaries set by her own fears were making it impossible for her.Many nights when she wokeup she wanted to awake and say Robin that come and sleep beside me on bed but it remained just a feared thought .Often she wanted to hug him when he said goodbye for office but instead of hugging him she suddenly piked up the trey and left room immediately .It was war inside her and she had fear to loose it sometimes.
Helda realized distance between Sara and Robin though she did not know the reason but she wanted to take advantage of this situation and encouraged Neena to be near with Robin .Neena hated their love story when she saw that Robin was completely unimpressed by her beauty and joined her just to please Sara .She felt helpless and her hatred arose in her heart for her sister.Neena always thought of Sara as a just ordinary girl with stupid ideas of life .When she realized that Robin is not responding as she expected she started to make fun of both husband and wife without thinking of their great efforts for her and her mom .
She often said in gatherings that these two fools are made for each other and both are of ordinary appearances and of stupid way of thinking ,always indulging in What is Good and What is Bad blah blah what a rubbish ..Neena often said to Sara that your husband is so ugly how do you get so close to him?
Sometime to she tried to make Robin suspicious in the eyes of Sara and asked her that did you noticed the way Robby was looking at me ? or did you see i asked for one thing and look he brought so many gifts for me ,ahh i know he likes me so much but not allowed to flirt with me sis as he is very afraid of you she said shamelessly .And in reply Sara always gave a calm smile which made Neena more furious .
Neena lived with them for two years and this era proved test for their silent but deep love .Neena 's mother who witnessed all silently because she knew the level of the patience of Sara and disturbing behavior of her little daughter .When Neena finished her matriculation her mother wanted her to get married with some nice boy but Neena had high expectations from life her dreams and desires were far greater then Sara's.
She left Sara's house and went to a city near her native village .She started to look for job and found one as phone operator in a small private office .Her mom was very concerned about her attitude because she knew that Neena is going against the rules of her society and tried hard to guide her towards right path but invain.Neena was ready to take flight towards her dream world.
to be continued
Dear friends sorry for late post as my eldest son came just for three days to celebrate yearly festival Eid.
God Bless You All
Interesting story love from Poland
ReplyDeleteInteresting story love from Poland
ReplyDeleteThe story is getting more interesting! Have a great day!
ReplyDeletevery interesting story!
ReplyDeleteHello, interesting read and story. Thanks for sharing. Happy Friday, enjoy your weekend!
ReplyDeleteKeep writing! You obviouly enjoy it!
ReplyDeleteI hope Eid was wonderful for you and your family!
It was worth the wait for this interesting instalment! Happy Eid.
ReplyDeleteGo, Neena, go! Pursue your dreams!
ReplyDeleteSo nice to get another lovely installment in this story!
ReplyDeleteNot "the normal" tale. thanx
ReplyDeleteI hope you had fun with your son and the festival!
ReplyDeleteI love this story!!!
Excellent post (as always)!Thank you very much :)
ReplyDeleteI like the story so far. Hope you had a nice visit with your son.
ReplyDeleteNeena is very strange, but I wait for continuation.
ReplyDeleteYour story is progressing so well, I don't know how you do it.
ReplyDeleteSo pleased that your eldest son came home for three days to celebrate your festival.
Take care
All the best Jan
Good for Neena! Hope you enjoyed the visit with your son.
ReplyDeleteI applaud Neena for pursuing her dreams, but I'm afraid I don't like her attitude toward her sister very much.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing! Keep on!
The story is interesting, I also like the images you choose to go with it.
ReplyDeleteI hope it was a good festival :)
ReplyDeleteI like the way you writing and the story itself is interesting.
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice story , so well written!
ReplyDeleteGreat that you got your son visiting!
oxo Susi
Interesting story and so happy you got to visit with your son ♥
ReplyDeleteJealousy is a difficult emotion to deal with. I like that Sarah is very mature about it xox
ReplyDeleteI'm happy you could have time to see your son ♡
so pleased to find your story here! it is an anxious time for Sara!
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What a captivating story! You have the gift of writing.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Wonderful writing..beautiful and intriguing story. Thanks for sharing your creative magic, Enjoy your family time too!
ReplyDeleteVictoria
Beautiful story dear! Thanks for sharing! xox
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We are driving home from Canada and I had lots of time to read this and I enjoyed it throughly. You are an excellent story teller!! I love son visits!!
ReplyDeleteso amazing
ReplyDeleteHi Baili, Incredible story and writing. Thank you for sharing and also for stopping by and your kind comment. Have a great week and happy fall.
ReplyDeleteHi Baili, Incredible story and writing. Thank you for sharing and also for stopping by and your kind comment. Have a great week and happy fall.
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I can't wait for more.
ReplyDeleteHi Baili, I hope you have an excellent visit with your son and come back soon to finish the great story! :-) Thank you for your very kind comments on my blog. Hope to see you often! Best regards from Seattle!
ReplyDeleteYou write wonderfully, and this is a very interesting story. I look forward to the next chapter. Happy to hear your son came to visit for the festival. I have a son also and know that feeling a visit brings :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a fun story you are writing!
ReplyDeleteMore power to Neena... Waiting for the next part.
ReplyDelete;D
ReplyDeleteLegal a história. Vou esperar pela continuação!
Ótima quarta!
Beijo! ^^
A son's visit is a time for joy. I see you have a love of language and story. Keep writing!
ReplyDeleteThe story continues to be very interesting, and I can hardly wait for the next part. Neena sounds slightly obnoxious. I imagine Sara would be happy to have some peace and quiet again after she leaves. I hope she soon has the braveness to tell Robin she loves him. Two years is a long time to wait.
ReplyDeleteWow...!
ReplyDeleteThis is so captivating!
Looking forward to the next part....
lovely story and I like your choise of images.
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