It was January.Days were cold and nights were colder . Rains were spoiling the paint of front yard walls .Sometime when sara looked at walls she found them so tangled and scary she thought as if it is her barren heart with so many complex conditions.Still she could not find out what is the reason behind her restlessness.
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Sara and Robin were living like two strangers who travel in same train sit so close to each other exchange their thoughts over various topics just to time pass.Robins gentle and calm behavior was still unable to touch Sara's heart that was felt by Robin .
Sara controlled her emotions strongly and remain normal and carefree.But deep inside her heart something was raising
so tiny as a first tiny leaf comes out from ground grabbing itself out of the shell of strong seed.The day when she sent letter to her mom and sister she faced mixed feeling of peace and anxiety. In the night when Robin was asleep she looked at him for long ,
she felt as Robin's face has kind of magnetism which is attracting her sight so strongly as she was unable to resist his attraction.For the first time of her life she felt herself free from the cage of fear
fear of being close to her man .
She wanted to lay beside him but what if he awakes , and this thought made her chocked and she immediately removed her eyes from Robin's face.She put her hand on her chest and felt the beat fast.She turned towards the wall side and closed her eyes to get some sleep but that night she dreamed all about Robin his handsome personality his so attractive smile his huge shiny mesmerizing eyes that capture one's heart .
In her dream she lied beside him put hand over his strong chest and slept with a peaceful smile on her face .
Next morning when she woke up her dream was floating in her awaken eyes but her thought could not reach Robin.She made breakfast and they both had it together .There was little talk about Sara's mom and sister who were coming tomorrow ,Then he left for office .
It was routine that after him Sara used to bear the sharp cold eyes and words from her mother in law and humiliating behavior in kitchen when she get near to Sara . But strangely Sara never gave her any importance she was of opinion that women limited to houses mostly are same they pity on themselves and instead of doing something to improve or empower they use their energies in negative way the make foolish plans to take each other down and don't let go any chance to pull each other's leg .
Though Sara was far younger in age then her mother in law but she was far mature then her when it come to way of thinking and behaving .She never complained Robin about it and she felt that because of it her M in law was getting more crazy.Good thing was that she was quite normal in front of Robin and Sara was fine with it without knowing that some day she will blast finally.
Next day Sara 's mom and sister arrived ,Her mom seemed terrible though Neena was fine .Sara was glad that because of Robin her loved ones were out of trouble.Sara put their luggage in side room and made the nice food .They had evening tea together and Robin meanwhile asked Neena to get ready to restart her studies as he will arrange his admission in Girls high school little far from house.Neena showed excitement and thanked Robin for his concern.
Soon within few days Neena became a popular person in the whole big family .She was so beautiful in looks and vibrant in life style .Everyone liked her even Helda smiled in her company ,The youger sister of Robin Elina was also in same school with Neena and she idealized Neena for her approach of life and fashion and style in living and wearings .Robin's younger brother Teddy was also inspired by her cheerful personality .
She used to laugh much and loud ,she enjoyed life and took it light she never regret that her two years of study were wasted or back home they had to face numerous problems .She was person who live in moment and keep eye on future.Her personality had many complexes .She belong to a poor broken family and it was fact undeniable .But she decided to be rich and successful person who gets what ever he want and stands above from where all looks so tiny and worthless .
These were the reasons that to be center of everybody's attention was the first step of her planing it gave her an alcoholic kind of joy.She remained unsatisfied till she did not get the attention of everyone around it was insult to her.
To be continued
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Sara and Robin were living like two strangers who travel in same train sit so close to each other exchange their thoughts over various topics just to time pass.Robins gentle and calm behavior was still unable to touch Sara's heart that was felt by Robin .
Sara controlled her emotions strongly and remain normal and carefree.But deep inside her heart something was raising
so tiny as a first tiny leaf comes out from ground grabbing itself out of the shell of strong seed.The day when she sent letter to her mom and sister she faced mixed feeling of peace and anxiety. In the night when Robin was asleep she looked at him for long ,
she felt as Robin's face has kind of magnetism which is attracting her sight so strongly as she was unable to resist his attraction.For the first time of her life she felt herself free from the cage of fear
fear of being close to her man .
She wanted to lay beside him but what if he awakes , and this thought made her chocked and she immediately removed her eyes from Robin's face.She put her hand on her chest and felt the beat fast.She turned towards the wall side and closed her eyes to get some sleep but that night she dreamed all about Robin his handsome personality his so attractive smile his huge shiny mesmerizing eyes that capture one's heart .
In her dream she lied beside him put hand over his strong chest and slept with a peaceful smile on her face .
Next morning when she woke up her dream was floating in her awaken eyes but her thought could not reach Robin.She made breakfast and they both had it together .There was little talk about Sara's mom and sister who were coming tomorrow ,Then he left for office .
It was routine that after him Sara used to bear the sharp cold eyes and words from her mother in law and humiliating behavior in kitchen when she get near to Sara . But strangely Sara never gave her any importance she was of opinion that women limited to houses mostly are same they pity on themselves and instead of doing something to improve or empower they use their energies in negative way the make foolish plans to take each other down and don't let go any chance to pull each other's leg .
Though Sara was far younger in age then her mother in law but she was far mature then her when it come to way of thinking and behaving .She never complained Robin about it and she felt that because of it her M in law was getting more crazy.Good thing was that she was quite normal in front of Robin and Sara was fine with it without knowing that some day she will blast finally.
Next day Sara 's mom and sister arrived ,Her mom seemed terrible though Neena was fine .Sara was glad that because of Robin her loved ones were out of trouble.Sara put their luggage in side room and made the nice food .They had evening tea together and Robin meanwhile asked Neena to get ready to restart her studies as he will arrange his admission in Girls high school little far from house.Neena showed excitement and thanked Robin for his concern.
Soon within few days Neena became a popular person in the whole big family .She was so beautiful in looks and vibrant in life style .Everyone liked her even Helda smiled in her company ,The youger sister of Robin Elina was also in same school with Neena and she idealized Neena for her approach of life and fashion and style in living and wearings .Robin's younger brother Teddy was also inspired by her cheerful personality .
She used to laugh much and loud ,she enjoyed life and took it light she never regret that her two years of study were wasted or back home they had to face numerous problems .She was person who live in moment and keep eye on future.Her personality had many complexes .She belong to a poor broken family and it was fact undeniable .But she decided to be rich and successful person who gets what ever he want and stands above from where all looks so tiny and worthless .
These were the reasons that to be center of everybody's attention was the first step of her planing it gave her an alcoholic kind of joy.She remained unsatisfied till she did not get the attention of everyone around it was insult to her.
To be continued
Your story telling is great. I liked the story. But you need to add a space after every full stop. Sorry for sounding critical about it.
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