Wednesday, June 29, 2011

last good bye (poem)

it was beautiful rainy day,

the road was empty,long and grey,

i was walking all alone,

listening to the air's tone,

which was sharing, its all joy,

sometime bold and, sometime shy,

drops were trembling from the trees,

birds were swimming in the breeze,

every thing was so perfect,

but i dont know what i did missed,

could not take even one breath,

which could make me bit happy,

felt huge burden on the heart,

couldn't realize from where it got,

feet like had iron shoes,

tried but hardly i could move,

then i saw a lake and sat,

taking bit rest was not so bad,

i saw reflection in lake,

it was tired unfresh face,

it took moment to recognize oh,

it was me, but changed a lot,

where was that, sweet little girl,

where were the eyes, shining like Pearl,

where had the innocent, smile gone,

did storm of time, has everything blown,

then i heard a slight cry,

like quite far from it came by,

i looked back and found her far,

walking away along her charm,

it will happen,i had no thought,

finally we were being apart,

this time i did not say, stop,

as strangers do not talk,


  1. I loved those pictures and the poem.Could you tell me something more about those pictures?

  2. As always, you have a way with words. This is the best!

  3. Salaam Sister,

    I loved the poem so much. I don't know what inspired you to write these beautiful lines.

    But the poem reminds me of the wonderful opportunities which we come across in this life but we don't care to avail and the time of saying good bye arrives.

    Wonderful message!
    Thank you so much for viewing the video I published on my blog and I loved your comments as well.

    May Allah bless you as well!

  4. Nice poem, shabana. What's up? thought your pc is ok?:)

  5. Lovely poem! Happy blogging to you and have a nice day too


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