When i look at you ,you are dense and vast
Like withered debris from gunfire's blast
At first glance full of beauty and peace
Puzzled and complicated when look into deep
Happy, sad ,angry confused or frail ?
Sometimes i feel "cat chasing it's tail"
At first, i found you full of different things
Realised,in all your tunes ,One song you sing!
Song of life and death, song of stillness and breath
Existence ,survival, revolution and growth
Song of good and bad ,song of light and dark
Song is actually" One "sung by reptile or lark
Everything around is your thought's reflection
As you are experiencing your own expressions
As you had no one to play along with you
And to do so created countless versions of you
From tiny to huge stuck in crazy rotation
Everything here seem to follow same old fashion
I wonder what set you on this clueless roam ?
Or you acted randomly on your first thought own
Did you think of the way and everything be need ?
Or you felt content by holding single seed (hope to reach somewhere maybe)
Seed of desire to swirl in an endless dance ?
Making sure joining you all your nuance
Where is the wall that gives back what it take?
Why all actions done here are "echoing back" ?
Trying to figure out some mystery unsolved ?
Is there with you anybody else is involved ???
Is this circulation is just meaningless passion?
Or you too have some specific destination ?
If you searching something ,how silly this sound
How one get somewhere by going round and round?
Or your swirl is way of transformation ?
From "being" to not "being" a silent conversion ?
Is all the existential labour is done for purification ?
So you can embrace back your Centre after Liberation ?
My all assumptions will keep me anxious
Until i melt and dissolve into your ocean
Maybe i will find answer ever or never will be
But being part of your journey is enough for me!
Very good
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DeleteThis is a wonderful poem! I absolutely love it!!!! You have captured the mystery and beauty and wonder that we all feel.
ReplyDeletedear Debra! thank you for sharing your thoughts
Deleteyes universe is not just wonderful home we live exist in but it challenges us with it's mysterious behaviours and strict web of laws in which everything seems to circulate under certain rules
It is a great journey. It's one we must all take.
ReplyDeletetrue dear Emma ,despite all the odds we cannot deny how much we enjoy this journey of awe and wonder
DeleteA lovely poem Baili and thought provoking too.
ReplyDelete,for a thinking mind it is dear Margaret :) thanks
DeleteYou ask the stars where all things go,
ReplyDeleteWhy life must spin and rivers flow.
Perhaps the answer we cannot see,
Is simply ... to join the mystery.
Beautiful and thought-provoking, dear Baili!
absolutely correct dear John
Deletebeing "alive" is quite interesting and exiting state unless we know too much and dark side of the picture make us feel sad and disappointed .Still curiosity is gift that remains strong and keep us pushing to learn more . it seems part of the pattern we are in .
At the same time finding life worth living and enjoying it's ups and down is also gift that keep us going .glad you liked poem !
A wonderful poem, Baili. I didn't know you're a poet, but you definitely are. I would like the universe to give me the answers to some questions, but I'm along for the ride no matter what.
ReplyDeleteLove,
Janie
thank you dear Janie for generous word!
Deleteyes ,enjoying the ride matters most :)
Lovely poem Baili.
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
thank you dear Jan!
DeleteDear Baili, you ask questions we all wonder but you form them better. I love how you choose the words. You have a way of finding interesting expressions that make me stop and think... and I wish I had more time to contemplate these lines. 🙏🏻
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment today! At the moment, my blog list claims your latest post is that of September 3. 🙁 I hope things will start to work again.
I wish you good health and much happiness and send many big hugs! 🤗❤️ See you soon again!
dear Sara! thanks for heartwarming words! means lot to me!
Deletei feel happy you enjoyed and liked my simple poetry :) writing poetry in native language is so easy therefore i prefer try to write in English because i like challenges maybe :)
i really hope and pray that may you can stay with blogger and i can read your awesome posts :) thank you again for positive words dear friend ,you are most welcome always and i hope we keep seeing each other 🤞❤️
love ,hugs and best wishes for you🙏
Baili your poem is touching and beautiful. Life here on earth (universe) has many questions but God holds all the answers and it is wonderful to trust Him! Hugs!
ReplyDeletesuch a lovely way to say this dear Debbie 🥹
ReplyDeleteYes it is wonderful to trust Him !
Our Faith is the only way to feel his presence ,so we should never loose this treasure 🥹🙏
such wonderful questions. The journey my mind takes is always questing.
ReplyDeletedear Susan isn't it amazing to be part of such journey full of wonders that keep us on toes in search of answers .When look at death everything we do in life seems just matter of timepass isn't it
DeleteÉ sempre muito bom quando a visito e encontro um poema lindo como este e cheio de motivos de reflexão.
ReplyDeleteTudo de bom.
Um beijo.
hearing such heartwarming words from you is truly uplifting dear Grace :)
DeleteA wonderful poem, Baili. Our universe does like guarding its mysteries.
ReplyDeleteAmalia
xo
dear Amalia i feel agreed to you on this as everything i look at seems to invite us to solve this mystery :)
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