Journey Of Will ! (poem)
Sitting in the room, with darkened silence
Protecting herself, from outer violence
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She was shivering, with lack of hope
As about to slip, in the well of dope
Threaten by , each tiny move
Broken by , numerous groove
Very smoothly , driving her nuts
Dancing around her "ifs" and "buts"
"If i will open, window or door "
"Wild weather , will crush my core "
Rain stopped and sun came out
Time to cheer, and wander about
Opened window, and peeked through
Sense of joy , must be grow
Oh my ,it's , windy and cold
I can't fit, in this mould
Day got warm , chilled and breezy
Under blue, walking was easy
Now she was, upset by noise
Bunch of crows making it rise
"Oh they will scratch my nerves"
"Can't be focus to see or observe "
Closed the window and hold the book
But inside ,something still so crook
Banging head like ruthless hammer
From the tap, it was dropping water
Left the book and hold her head
Injured her , hit of drops so bad
Laid down, with withered breath
Pillow drank, her flowing tears
Dipped in, despair and fears
Then she felt pain in chest
Death howled , upon the heart's nest
Once it seemed that she was sunken
From the nest bird was taken
But it was , just a gust
Within which , wish of Life busted
After hours , when got to sense
Pearls of peace,, shine immense
Opened eyes, and looked around
Everything, Freshening sound
Took a Deep, and Serene breath!
Got up , with Peace so... deep!
Felt new , Strength in her Being!
On the lips ,slight smile playing :)
As "Life " for her was Calling !
As she was ready for walking!
Since then she is Sage !
Freed herself from every Cage!
Nothing bothers , her anymore
She has Opened Soul's Door !
Towards Heaven, of Positive thoughts !
Blown away, all negative knots
Singing now a Happy Song !!!
She enjoys whatever come along!
She was shivering, with lack of hope
As about to slip, in the well of dope
Threaten by , each tiny move
Broken by , numerous groove
Very smoothly , driving her nuts
Dancing around her "ifs" and "buts"
"If i will open, window or door "
"Wild weather , will crush my core "
Rain stopped and sun came out
Time to cheer, and wander about
Opened window, and peeked through
Sense of joy , must be grow
Oh my ,it's , windy and cold
I can't fit, in this mould
Day got warm , chilled and breezy
Under blue, walking was easy
Now she was, upset by noise
Bunch of crows making it rise
"Oh they will scratch my nerves"
"Can't be focus to see or observe "
Closed the window and hold the book
But inside ,something still so crook
Banging head like ruthless hammer
From the tap, it was dropping water
Left the book and hold her head
Injured her , hit of drops so bad
Laid down, with withered breath
Pillow drank, her flowing tears
Dipped in, despair and fears
Then she felt pain in chest
Death howled , upon the heart's nest
Once it seemed that she was sunken
From the nest bird was taken
But it was , just a gust
Within which , wish of Life busted
After hours , when got to sense
Pearls of peace,, shine immense
Opened eyes, and looked around
Everything, Freshening sound
Took a Deep, and Serene breath!
Got up , with Peace so... deep!
Felt new , Strength in her Being!
On the lips ,slight smile playing :)
As "Life " for her was Calling !
As she was ready for walking!
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Since then she is Sage !
Freed herself from every Cage!
Nothing bothers , her anymore
She has Opened Soul's Door !
Towards Heaven, of Positive thoughts !
Blown away, all negative knots
Singing now a Happy Song !!!
She enjoys whatever come along!
What a wonderful poem, Baili. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI love a happy ending!
ReplyDeleteA song of triumph!
ReplyDeleteIt is encouraging, Baili, beautiful and strong.
🌻
Beautiful
ReplyDeleteThis was inspiring. It shows a sad soul afraid to live. Then the new soul enjoyed the freedom of life. A good lesson.
ReplyDeleteWow! The is an amazing writing. So much power in these words.
ReplyDeleteLovely to read your words Baili.
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
I love where she is now…
ReplyDeleteSuch a heartfelt poem, dear baili.
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
A lovely uplifting poem, Baili! "Life " for her was Calling! That same feeling pulls me out of slumps too! Thank goodness! 😂
ReplyDeleteThat is an amazing poem. I loved it and the ending!!
ReplyDeleteI’m glad to know, Baili, where you are now, after going through tough times.
ReplyDeleteYou have a way with words and your choice of two images complement the poem.
This is an excerpt from my favorite song:
“Somewhere, a voice calls, in the depths of heart
Keep dreaming your dreams, don’t ever them part
Why speak of all your sadness or of life’s painful woes
Instead let the same lips sing a gentle song for you”
Have peaceful days ahead.
Yoko
Dear Baili,
ReplyDeleteYour words, a dance of shadow and flame,
Trace pain and triumph—never the same.
A whisper rises from silent despair,
Carved with courage and laid bare.
You penned the dark with fearless grace,
Each aching line a sacred place.
You showed the tremble, the tear, the fall,
And how the soul can rise through it all.
From guarded room to winds that bite,
You stitched each fear into the light.
Through tapping tears and broken breath,
You gently walked the edge of death.
Yet there—within the hush between—
You found a peace, a breath serene.
And oh, how brightly now you shine,
A soul unchained, a heart divine.
So here’s to you, brave verse and will—
To quiet strength and battles still.
Your poem sings with wisdom deep,
Where wounds have cried, and now… they sleep.
You’ve lit the lamp that others seek—
A voice for those who feel too weak.
Your journey written, raw and true,
Speaks of the storm—and breaking through.
John