Fresh new sun when knocked at door
Another day appeared with list of chores
Here starts the race of time
Everyday life's random rhyme
Clock is ticking like bugle sound
I ignore by go round and round
Sweet or sour is life's pickle
Tasting it is inevitable
Hasting around the household maze
I could hold the blogging trace
But when sat with my laptop
Shaky thoughts all i could grasp
Felt entangled in numerous knots
Lots to do and time is short :(
What to do when mind is blank ?
Empty totally, idea's tank ?
Think ,please think you have lot to share
Weekly post at least you care
But brain blinking as owl at night
As he got everything out of sight
Okay fine i gave up
Wishing everyone just good luck !
Hope you all find beautiful day
All the best things on your way !!!!!!!!
Having younger son at home makes me little busier dear friends :)
will continue to visiting you all though .
sending much love and heartfelt best wishes to you all and to all you love!
I'm glad you can be busy. I'm glad your son is there. Thanks for the poem. It made me smile. All the best to your creativity from the laptop to the kitchen and beyond🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸
ReplyDeleteEven though you thought you had nothing to post, dear Baili, you just did with this poem 😉 well done, my friend.
ReplyDeleteIs it better to be too busy or not busy enough? I hope you find some time balance! I liked the imagery you use in this poem, especially the sweet and sour pickles!
ReplyDeleteYES, SOMETIMES i RUN OUT OF TOPICS TO WRITE ABOUT AND THEN i JUST WAIT UNTIL SOMETHING POPS INTO MY HEAD.
ReplyDeleteWell done
ReplyDeleteThis poem beautifully captures the gentle chaos of everyday life—the rush, the pressure, the blank page, and the quiet resilience beneath it all. The conversational tone makes it feel like a letter from a friend, and the imagery ("clock is ticking like bugle sound," "brain blinking as owl at night") is both vivid and relatable.
ReplyDeleteYour closing lines are especially warm, reminding readers that even in the messiness of life, kindness and connection endure. Thank you for sharing this slice of honest, heartfelt reflection. May your days be full of small joys—even in the busiest hours.
It's good that your younger son is there.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your poem.
My good wishes.
All the best Jan
I'm glad you have your son there. Balancing out the busy of one's life can be a bit tricky. However, knowing you and the passion you have for life and your giving heart makes it come to peace.
ReplyDeleteI love the way you relayed your thoughts and feelings, Baili. Well done.
ReplyDeleteGood poem. Not much fun when the mind goes blank!
ReplyDeleteEnjoy the company of your son, dear baili.
ReplyDeleteThere's much more time to blog afterwards.
The brain you call empty came up with this brilliant poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteUm poema de que gostei muito, que transmite o seu estado de espírito.
ReplyDeleteUma boa semana.
Um beijo.
It seems like I have too many things to blog about or my mind is blank.
ReplyDeleteThanks dear Kathy 🥰
DeleteWe all face issues of time and energy management once in a while. I really miss my both elder sons and whenever I get opportunity to be with them I want to do everything I can do to comfort them including cooking for them.it makes me go through whirlwind sometimes 😂
Stopping by to wish you peace and instead got to enjoy your poem. Glad you have your son at home. Enjoy life and write more poetry. It's nice to read.
ReplyDeleteAlways pleasure in hear from you my dear friend Sandy 🤗♥️
ReplyDeleteI think things are getting normal as far I know by the grace of God🙏
People of both sides want peace but political authorities need to create environment which they think can benefit their popularity which is unfortunate for common people but who care for them anyway
I am glad you enjoyed my simple poetry dear friend 🥰♥️
Hello Baili,
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem! Enjoy your time with your son!
Family time is more important than housework.
Take care, enjoy your day and the week ahead.
Very good
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