an old poem from 2010
tonight i am not feeling so high,
tonight i am not feeling so high,
there are countless tears ,in night 's eye,
i am staring at moon,moon staring at me,
we both are together but feeling lonely ,
we live so far but ,how strange ,
we bear mostly the same pain,
we walking along ,at the bank of stream,
and share each other our soundless scream,
the wind has got some sorrowful phrase,
because i can listen the trees cries,
you should not ask me my friend 'why?
some time we just want sit and cry,
it is not necessarily has reason behind,
though ,emotions has nothing to do with mind,
i am staring at moon,moon staring at me,
we both are together but feeling lonely ,
we live so far but ,how strange ,
we bear mostly the same pain,
we walking along ,at the bank of stream,
and share each other our soundless scream,
the wind has got some sorrowful phrase,
because i can listen the trees cries,
you should not ask me my friend 'why?
some time we just want sit and cry,
it is not necessarily has reason behind,
though ,emotions has nothing to do with mind,
The moon understands our pain and sorrow.
ReplyDeletemoon and other nature ;s feature have healing energy
DeleteNature can absorb some of our pain so beautifully if we let go. Beautifully written, Baili.
ReplyDeletethis is astonishing how our Creator has created such healing and comforting nature dear Marie .it's only on us as we can take help
DeleteThanks for the beautiful poem. I think the late year might bring this own. Sometimes, we sense this more and more for many reasons. Wishing you the best with your family. Hope you are doing well. It is getting so cold here. Thank you so much for your comments. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity! Peace Everyday, Ellie
ReplyDeletehuman nature gas this desire for both to feel sadness and joy once in a while dear Ellie .we feel happy or sad for no obvious reason i agree specially in autumn season and evening times
DeleteSitting with you here, Baili.
ReplyDeletehugs to you dear Sandi !
DeleteLovely
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteThat is beautiful. I believe tears are a way of cleansing the soul.
ReplyDeletei totally agree dear Ema
DeleteSuch a beautifully melancholic poem, filled with deep emotion and introspection. The imagery of the moon, wind, and trees expressing sorrow creates a vivid atmosphere of shared loneliness. It’s a powerful reminder that sometimes we don’t need a reason for our feelings, and it’s okay to simply sit and cry. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece!
ReplyDeletei loved how you put this dear Melody
Deletethe word "shared loneliness" is very impressive and powerful enough to express the gloom of the poem thank you
This is beautiful, dear Baili. We all feel this way sometimes and you have expressed it so clearly and emotionally. Sending you hugs and blessings xo K
ReplyDeletethank you dear Karen
DeleteBeautiful poem, yet sad, Baili.
ReplyDeletejoy and sadness both complete our story as human dear Margaret
DeleteBeautiful poem, dear baili
ReplyDeletethanks
DeleteOuvir os gritos das árvores. Pensamento muito poético e oportuno.
ReplyDeleteUma boa semana.
Um beijo.
depends on mood :)
ReplyDeleteYou write such heartfelt and beautiful poetry, Baili! This is one of my most favorites of yours. Thanks for sharing it again! ❤️
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your words Baili, thank you.
ReplyDeleteSending good wishes to you and your family.
All the best Jan
thanks dear Jan
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