Through the window hey
Got Down sunray
Kiss your cheek and say
Come on don't lay
Well come to the New Happy Day!
First wake up and say
Few words of pray
Thank the God who brought
To you happy new day
Then follow the ray
Let's go out and play
Look at sky,,How blue!
Sun is peeking through
Showering golden love
Upon earth's each curve
Garden Full of flowers
Birds are flying happily
Though the beamy towers
Lake is serene and chilly
Looks so proud to have lily
Breeze is blowing with the scent
Trees are waving with the bent
Don't think that i am mad
Everyone is looking glad!
Let's too join the play
Sing and dance say"hurry"!!!
My precious fellows i just write poetry like thing above which jumped in to my head just after sitting on the laptop .
Hope you will not mind much it it ruins your taste , as first of all English is not my native language but what do i do that i love this language so much and cannot stop to translate my imagination in this beautiful one. And can't even strain myself to share it with you guys .
I am one who has always a fight with time and hardly win the one , waiting for the day when my kids will grow enough and i will be able to "THINK" so till then kindly bear my spontaneous efforts , though you are invited respectfully to point out my mistakes as best friends do .
Stay blessed always with self respect ,Be happy with you! so other will be happy with you too.
Most dangerous thing in this world is "SELF PITY" which leads to self destruction please don;t be the victim ever . Love you so much.
God Bless You All!!!
I love your lyrical poem, lovely Baili. In my mind's eye I can see the beautiful blue sky with the sun peeking through the window. I can hear the trees softly rustling and I can smell all those delicious fragrance of nature. Indeed, you have a magical talent with words. May you enjoy your beautiful day, lovely lady.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Kim!
ReplyDeleteYour comment also reveals the powerful imagery you have my friend !
Your description lift my words higher
Bonjour,
ReplyDeleteUn bien joli poème... qui illumine ma journée.
Gros bisous
Great verse. I love nature and poetry that is about nature.
ReplyDeleteI also feel that I am always fighting the clock.
Have a great week!
So pretty and sincere, love it! ☺
ReplyDeleteThank you for the beautiful start to another day, Baili.
ReplyDeleteA really lovely and delightful read. Warm greetings to you!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the charming poem!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely reminder to stay positive and enjoy the beauty of our surroundings. Hugs, RO
ReplyDeleteThanks for this happy poem! You have a natural talent for writing even if English is not your first language, it is a flair that many don't have, even if it is their first language!
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem. You did a marvelous job and it doesn't matter that English is not your native language.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem and photo!
ReplyDelete"...as first of all English is not my native language"
ReplyDeleteI wish I could speak a second language as well as you speak English!
I always love to read your poems, and indeed all your writing, baili, as you have a way with words and imagery that makes clear pictures in my mind and your kindness always shines through. And like Sandi says, I wish I could speak another language as well as you do!
ReplyDeleteI have completed my Mystery Award post and it will publish at 0030 hours my time tomorrow (Friday), my friend! Thank you again for passing on this award to me among others; I found it a very good basis for thinking and writing something completely different from what I otherwise might post. I confess I slightly did not adhere to the rules, but you will see that when you visit :)
Lovely post dear!
ReplyDeleteYour poem is full of gloriously warm good feelings.
ReplyDeleteBlessings unto you and thank you for this beautiful verse.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so beautiful :-)
ReplyDeleteYour expressions in English, I understand perfectly.
After recently retiring from work. I seem to have less time than when I was focussed on a schedule! But I do have more time to 'THINk' and explore ideas :-)
Your children will be grown up before you realise. The older you get the quicker time flies!!
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem and I hope your weekend brings you joy :)
thank you dear Prunella.
Deleteactually often i don't want my kids to be older soon as when they get old they leave the nest alone and fly away as my eldest one staying in another city for job for almost 7 years i miss him so so so much and some time i cry even we visit each other within few months .
But sometime when i want to sit to create a good piece of writing i find time flying and due responsibilities make it hard for me so such thoughts partly come in my mind for while
Thanks for commenting on my blog. It was very kind of you. I've ad a look at your blog and like it. I will post some more when I've had a good look around.
DeleteSuch a lovely poem and it brought sunshine to this cloudy day. :)
ReplyDeleteYour writing makes the blog-world happier. You know, sometimes I write down (in my diary) the comment you wrote on my post, because it's so beautiful.
Hugs and blessings!
Oh dear Sara you are so generous!
DeleteWill you believe that your words made my eyes teary! Tears of joy you know!!!
I am honoured by your words my precious friend!
♥ :)
DeleteYou're so sweet Baili :) And your poem is too! Time is something that I can finally enjoy and take as it comes, I'm very grateful for that!
ReplyDeleteHi Baili,
ReplyDeleteMy kind, new friend, after your thoughtful comment on my site I thought it about time I visited your wondrous site which does delight.
Such magical, enlightening poetry you have shared. Of course, poetry has its own language and you have most assuredly proven that.
Thank you and I wish you a peaceful, positive weekend.
In kindness,
Gary :)
Your poetry is lovely. And I enjoy your posts very much. No need for corrections. Your writing style is very charming!
ReplyDeleteA happy day forever.
ReplyDeleteWarmest regards.
How lovely this poem is! It is so lightsome and cheerful! :-)
ReplyDeleteI wish my English was as good as yours! Reading your beautiful posts and very kind comments I always admire how rich your English vocabulary is. I'm usually worried even about that I really wrote what I wanted to say... :-)
Congratulation on your award! You absolutely deserve it, my friend! :-)
The Sun is rising here right now, and your poem drives me to go out to the garden. I hope you have a wonderful Sunday! Warm hugs!
Hello Baili, I love your happy, positive poem!
ReplyDeleteThere is so much sadness in this world, but so much beauty too... And our children are the most presiuos ones.
Wishing you a happy day,
Ida
A lovely poem Baili. Very creative and very nice to read. Poems flow through your body and you release it through your fingertips. Thank you for sharing this with us.
ReplyDeleteA lovely poem, a joy to read.
ReplyDeleteI also liked the image you used.
All the best Jan
What a delightful poem, Baili. I love reading poetry. And thank you for your words at the end. I appreciate that today, as I'm dealing with a family issue and it's a bit overwhelming right now.
ReplyDelete~Sheri
Thank you my precious friend!
DeleteMy prays and best will be with you at each step
Beautiful words my friend! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteThanks for this happy poem! You have a natural talent for writing even if English is not your first language,
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Your poem delighted me, Baili! It is joyful and inspiring, and it has an important message behind it. Every day is a precious gift and filled with wonder, if you only open your eyes and see. I thank God every day for the gift of a new day, often before I even get out of bed. My thoughts on God are complicated and confused, and I am unhappy about what is happening in our world in the name of its major religions, but my instinct is always thank God every morning and throughout the day.
ReplyDeleteYour poem has lovely images. I particularly love the image of the sun showering love on the Earth's curves! But most of all I love its joyfulness!
I laughed when I read about your fight with time! I've fought time all my life. I thought I would have more time once I retired. Ha! I still struggle, so I've decided to make peace with time and do the best I can each day.
P.S. You asked for a little help. I think you had a typo at the end. I'm guessing that your fight with time was in your mind, for you typed "hurry" instead of "hurray." That one little "a" makes a big difference! LOL Have a good one, my friend!