Wednesday, July 26, 2017

The Invitation (from a sun ray) poem


     Through   the   window   hey

      Got   Down  sunray


      Kiss   your   cheek  and   say  

      Come   on  don't   lay

      Well   come    to   the   New  Happy   Day!

       First    wake   up   and   say   
       Few   words   of   pray  

      Thank   the   God  who   brought

      To   you   happy   new   day

       Then   follow   the   ray 

         Let's   go   out   and   play

Look   at   sky,,How   blue!

Sun   is   peeking   through

Showering   golden   love

Upon  earth's   each   curve  

Garden   Full   of   flowers  

Birds   are   flying   happily 

Though  the   beamy  towers

Lake   is   serene  and  chilly 

Looks  so  proud  to  have  lily

Breeze    is   blowing   with   the   scent

Trees   are   waving   with   the  bent

Don't   think  that   i  am  mad

Everyone  is  looking   glad!

Let's  too   join   the   play

Sing  and  dance  say"hurry"!!!

My   precious   fellows   i   just   write   poetry  like   thing  above   which   jumped  in to  my  head  just   after  sitting  on   the   laptop .

Hope   you  will  not   mind  much  it  it  ruins    your   taste ,  as  first   of  all  English   is  not  my  native   language  but  what   do   i    do   that     i    love   this   language  so   much   and   cannot   stop   to   translate   my   imagination  in  this  beautiful  one.   And  can't  even   strain  myself   to   share   it   with   you   guys .

 I   am   one   who   has   always   a   fight   with   time  and  hardly  win   the  one ,     waiting   for   the   day   when   my   kids  will  grow   enough   and  i  will  be   able   to  "THINK"  so   till   then  kindly   bear   my   spontaneous   efforts  ,     though   you   are  invited    respectfully    to  point   out   my   mistakes    as  best   friends  do .

Stay   blessed   always   with   self respect ,Be   happy   with  you!   so   other  will  be   happy   with  you   too.

Most   dangerous  thing  in  this   world  is "SELF  PITY"   which   leads   to   self    destruction       please  don;t  be  the  victim ever .    Love  you so  much.

God  Bless  You  All!!! 


  1. I love your lyrical poem, lovely Baili. In my mind's eye I can see the beautiful blue sky with the sun peeking through the window. I can hear the trees softly rustling and I can smell all those delicious fragrance of nature. Indeed, you have a magical talent with words. May you enjoy your beautiful day, lovely lady.

  2. Thank you dear Kim!
    Your comment also reveals the powerful imagery you have my friend !

    Your description lift my words higher

  3. Bonjour,

    Un bien joli poème... qui illumine ma journée.

    Gros bisous

  4. Great verse. I love nature and poetry that is about nature.

    I also feel that I am always fighting the clock.

    Have a great week!

  5. So pretty and sincere, love it! ☺

  6. Thank you for the beautiful start to another day, Baili.

  7. A really lovely and delightful read. Warm greetings to you!

  8. What a lovely reminder to stay positive and enjoy the beauty of our surroundings. Hugs, RO

  9. Thanks for this happy poem! You have a natural talent for writing even if English is not your first language, it is a flair that many don't have, even if it is their first language!

  10. I really like this poem. You did a marvelous job and it doesn't matter that English is not your native language.

  11. " first of all English is not my native language"

    I wish I could speak a second language as well as you speak English!

  12. I always love to read your poems, and indeed all your writing, baili, as you have a way with words and imagery that makes clear pictures in my mind and your kindness always shines through. And like Sandi says, I wish I could speak another language as well as you do!

    I have completed my Mystery Award post and it will publish at 0030 hours my time tomorrow (Friday), my friend! Thank you again for passing on this award to me among others; I found it a very good basis for thinking and writing something completely different from what I otherwise might post. I confess I slightly did not adhere to the rules, but you will see that when you visit :)

  13. Your poem is full of gloriously warm good feelings.

  14. Blessings unto you and thank you for this beautiful verse.

  15. Your poem is so beautiful :-)

    Your expressions in English, I understand perfectly.

    After recently retiring from work. I seem to have less time than when I was focussed on a schedule! But I do have more time to 'THINk' and explore ideas :-)

  16. Your children will be grown up before you realise. The older you get the quicker time flies!!
    A lovely poem and I hope your weekend brings you joy :)

    1. thank you dear Prunella.

      actually often i don't want my kids to be older soon as when they get old they leave the nest alone and fly away as my eldest one staying in another city for job for almost 7 years i miss him so so so much and some time i cry even we visit each other within few months .

      But sometime when i want to sit to create a good piece of writing i find time flying and due responsibilities make it hard for me so such thoughts partly come in my mind for while

    2. Thanks for commenting on my blog. It was very kind of you. I've ad a look at your blog and like it. I will post some more when I've had a good look around.

  17. Such a lovely poem and it brought sunshine to this cloudy day. :)
    Your writing makes the blog-world happier. You know, sometimes I write down (in my diary) the comment you wrote on my post, because it's so beautiful.
    Hugs and blessings!

    1. Oh dear Sara you are so generous!
      Will you believe that your words made my eyes teary! Tears of joy you know!!!

      I am honoured by your words my precious friend!

  18. You're so sweet Baili :) And your poem is too! Time is something that I can finally enjoy and take as it comes, I'm very grateful for that!

  19. Hi Baili,

    My kind, new friend, after your thoughtful comment on my site I thought it about time I visited your wondrous site which does delight.

    Such magical, enlightening poetry you have shared. Of course, poetry has its own language and you have most assuredly proven that.

    Thank you and I wish you a peaceful, positive weekend.

    In kindness,

    Gary :)

  20. Your poetry is lovely. And I enjoy your posts very much. No need for corrections. Your writing style is very charming!

  21. A happy day forever.
    Warmest regards.

  22. How lovely this poem is! It is so lightsome and cheerful! :-)
    I wish my English was as good as yours! Reading your beautiful posts and very kind comments I always admire how rich your English vocabulary is. I'm usually worried even about that I really wrote what I wanted to say... :-)
    Congratulation on your award! You absolutely deserve it, my friend! :-)
    The Sun is rising here right now, and your poem drives me to go out to the garden. I hope you have a wonderful Sunday! Warm hugs!

  23. Hello Baili, I love your happy, positive poem!
    There is so much sadness in this world, but so much beauty too... And our children are the most presiuos ones.
    Wishing you a happy day,

  24. A lovely poem Baili. Very creative and very nice to read. Poems flow through your body and you release it through your fingertips. Thank you for sharing this with us.

  25. A lovely poem, a joy to read.
    I also liked the image you used.

    All the best Jan

  26. What a delightful poem, Baili. I love reading poetry. And thank you for your words at the end. I appreciate that today, as I'm dealing with a family issue and it's a bit overwhelming right now.


    1. Thank you my precious friend!
      My prays and best will be with you at each step

  27. Beautiful words my friend! Thank you!

  28. Thanks for this happy poem! You have a natural talent for writing even if English is not your first language,

    แตกใน xxx

  29. Your poem delighted me, Baili! It is joyful and inspiring, and it has an important message behind it. Every day is a precious gift and filled with wonder, if you only open your eyes and see. I thank God every day for the gift of a new day, often before I even get out of bed. My thoughts on God are complicated and confused, and I am unhappy about what is happening in our world in the name of its major religions, but my instinct is always thank God every morning and throughout the day.

    Your poem has lovely images. I particularly love the image of the sun showering love on the Earth's curves! But most of all I love its joyfulness!

    I laughed when I read about your fight with time! I've fought time all my life. I thought I would have more time once I retired. Ha! I still struggle, so I've decided to make peace with time and do the best I can each day.

    P.S. You asked for a little help. I think you had a typo at the end. I'm guessing that your fight with time was in your mind, for you typed "hurry" instead of "hurray." That one little "a" makes a big difference! LOL Have a good one, my friend!


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