He was weird he was strange
Tried hard though couldn’t change
His stupid habit of loving all
Without boundaries
Without man made wall
Some people would look him down
For many he was such a clown
Always ready to give up his will
Just to make others feel chilled
It would leave some people annoyed
Some puzzled and some surprised
How a such thing is even credible ?
Doesn’t he wanted to be respectable ?
Doesn’t he have some cast or name ?
With everyone this man is the same !
Most imprisoned in chains so hefty
Couldn’t imagine that he was free
From the shackles of discrimination
Cradling in the lap of realisation
Of being able to see beyond closed doors
Governing everything underlying force
Admirable!
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It’s actually my inner self but I just wanted to put it differently this time dear Sandi 🥹🥰
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DeleteA beautiful and perceptive poem, as always!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked dear Debra 🥰♥️
DeleteOh, this one has such wonderful character. I like how it plays out. You are a wonderful poet!
ReplyDeleteThanks for such a sweet comment dear Ellie 🥰🙏
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DeleteSome people put chains on themselves and they limit their freedom and achievements.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully said dear Red 🥰👍
DeleteI really feel sorry for them honestly 🥹
Interesting, Baili.
ReplyDeleteThanks dear Margaret 🥰
Delete“Loving all Without boundaries” makes him a great man in my book. Love this poem!
ReplyDeleteBecause you have a loving heart dear Marie 🥹♥️👍
DeleteA nice poem.
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Thank you for sharing your poem.
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
Many thanks dear Jan♥️🥰
DeleteHe was what love is.
ReplyDeleteAnd love is all we need to survive and thrive as proud and wise specie dear Emma 🥹🥰♥️
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DeleteLovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you dear Linda
DeleteThis poem could almost be describing the Lord Jesus. So lovely Baili. Hugs!
ReplyDeleteOh this is so sweet of you dear Debbie 🥰🙏♥️
DeletePoema muito bonito. Parabéns.
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Thanks dear friend 🙏🥰
DeleteLove this poem. It's greatful.
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O thanks dear Erica🙏♥️
DeleteSuch a wise poem, Baili, with a profound message. It made me think of Jesus, although I don't think that was your intent. There are many kind, compassionate, and empathetic people in our world. We just don't hear about them. I was having lunch by myself at a restaurant (Parkway) earlier this week and when I went to pay my bill, I found out that someone had paid it for me when he paid his own bill and left earlier. I was stunned! I will find a way to pay this stranger's kindness forward. Thanks for reminding us about the goodness in our world.
ReplyDeletePrecious friend Louise thank you so much for such heartwarming words 🥹
DeleteWhether Jesus or any other heart that looks at this scenario of life and universe as whole understanding the basic message of love and unity Nature seems to deliver through all of it’s forms can be the that man who sees not just what is obvious to physical eyes but what force is lying behind the show and governing everything quietly. Trying to point out to us that we are different not because the Creator lacks something but because He shows His faith in His men who will realise that our weaknesses and our powers are supposed to be shared by love and compassion for each other.
That kind gentleman who paid behalf of you must know this secret as well 🥹👍♥️
Dear Louise just like you I have thought that there must be many many more good people out there,if we can’t see them close it doesn’t mean they don’t exist 🥹🤗♥️
Sadly world seems to be squeezed by the current media and social media and they show negative news all the time,I can never loose the faith that at the same times when bad things happen,numerous good things also be happening here and there around the world. Because Creator has flawless design of the game he has created here .He knows how to keep balance!
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I just love you, Baili! You give me hope! ❤️
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ReplyDeleteYour words unfold a soul so rare,
Unbound by walls the world would wear.
He walks in love, both kind and wise—
A mirror of truth beneath all skies.
Freedom, it seems, is not to flee,
But to live in love’s equality.
John
It’s truly beautiful dear John 🥹
DeleteI really admire your astonishing talent to write poems instantly and yet so awesome 🥰👍♥️
The last stanza, where he is seen as free from the "shackles of discrimination," really drives home the idea that the deepest prisons are the ones we build for ourselves. It's a wonderful message about the power of realizing a broader, governing truth beyond shallow social structures.
ReplyDeleteHeartfelt thanks for such a wonderful and thoughtful response dear Melody 🥰👍
DeleteUndoubtedly it’s not easy for most of us to see beyond what hard core reality is installed in our minds already. I think it’s incredible gift to have such gift which liberates you from suffering caused by painful chains of all negative emotions!
Ability to realise that people are just tools of this world and the one force governing from behind the curtain is actual power to pull our strings by creating impossible circumstances but surely not to destroy us but seeing if we can see the truth and be wise and tolerant to each other. Love and compassion is the only solution for all problems we face today
I love your writings, beautiful.
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Thank you dear Pedro 🥰
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