Tuesday, September 16, 2025

A Journey To Nowhere poem by me

 When she awoke was completely in the dark 

Without any clue of light    and spark 



She  didn’t know what was that place 

And she didn’t know what she was 

Could be a desert or could be a room 

Loveliness , suffocating and gloom 

All she could hear ,her own breath 

But she did not know life or death 

She was certain   of that she is !

Though rest of everything was a mist

Wondering in awe and uncertainty 

Maybe that’s it ,till eternity 

She waited with urge to see

What she was and what could be 

Then with the help of hurts and lack 

Time created in the wall some cracks 

Her first introduction to the  light 

She realized that she had a sight !

Nurtured by her curiosity to know 

Her realization irresistibly  grow

It took ages but she broke all walls 

 First everything looked pretty overall 

Despite of the  ups and downs 

Worth wearing was life ‘s crown 

This  feeling gave her sense of liberation 

Her tools were compassion and imagination 

She thought she was good as nurse 

So why life will give her any curse 

She didn’t know that life is game like test

She challenges no matter how best 

Every moment and every day 

For what you get you have to pay

To save herself from any harm 

She  thought place of high and calm

She created her nest so high 

So she can avoid the sorrow near by

But she forgot when see from top 

Whole reality is in your grasp!

Peacefully sipping a cup of tea 

Seems impossible when you see 

People below are in so much pain 

This makes peace of  one’s soul drain !

It’s not only world outside 

Same thing  true world  inside 

Have you pondered on your thoughts as whole?

Pulling us in  numerous black holes 

Falling in can be risky or fun 

If you have a “ self control “ none 

Once she got this game as whole 

Rest was spent in how to “ hold”

But  it wasn’t just black hole’s pull 

Everything around appeared like insane bull

A comment, a gesture, a smile or look 

Can push her in a darkened brook

It could be fixed with meditation 

Confronted with next examination 

She could sense another intrude 

This time it was her own “food “

Though she was tired of constant struggle 

Thought it might be  last to tackle 

She  kept check on what she eat 

This  made her feel good at least 

All she did for one  true feeling 

Which seemed  only thing  as Healing!

In this world of full of choices 

She chose  “Faith “ to rejoice!

Faith in someone so Supreme 

Who created everything from his Gleam 



She doesn’t not understand His ways 

All  she knows  Above He stays 

This  liberates  her from the dope 

She can believe in “try” Pry “ and Hope!











25 comments:

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    1. Glad you liked my simple poetry dear Margaret πŸ₯°

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  2. Oh, just a joy to read your poetry. Thank you so much!

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    1. This is so kind of you dear Ellie πŸ₯°♥️πŸ™

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  3. I enjoyed your poem. It seems to explain 'being'.

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    1. So true about what poem explains dear friend Emma πŸ₯°πŸ‘
      Yes we all grow out of nothing and become according to our desires and passion. This poem explains how she tried her best to stay sane in the midst of the craziness of this world and can grasp and sustain the feeling that she found only source of hope and healing πŸ₯ΉπŸ™♥️πŸ₯°

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    1. Glad you enjoyed dear friend JanπŸ₯°πŸ™

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  5. Dear Baili, your verses shine so bright,
    They lead through shadows into light.
    Your gift is deep reflection true,
    A journey shared—thank you for you.

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    1. This is heartfelt dear John πŸ₯Ή
      So sweet of you dear friend πŸ₯°πŸ™
      I feel so inspired how beautifully and fluently you can write wow ,it’s incredible πŸ‘♥️πŸ₯°

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  6. Ohhh dear Baili. You are amazing. This is brilliant writing and should be published. Words from your soul.

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    1. Oh that’s so generous of you dear Nichole πŸ₯°πŸ™
      My words are so simple πŸ™‚
      From soul,yes!!!πŸ˜”

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  7. You have a way with words, Baili, and thank you for sharing this lovely poem with all of us. Hope is always something everyone needs more of these days no matter in which country he/she is living.

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    1. I totally agree dear Dorothy that world has changed and has become a place where suffering doesn’t seem to exist only for people and places that lack something but a common ground for evil to triumph unfortunately,sadly and disappointingly 😞πŸ₯Ή☹️

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  8. A lovely poem, Baili, I like that it ends with hope.
    Amalia
    xo

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    1. And all good endings come from hope dear Amalia πŸ™‚

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  9. This is a really beautiful and thoughtful poem. I love how you took me on a journey from that initial confusion to a place of understanding. The part about building a nest high up to avoid sorrow but then realizing you can't have peace when others are in pain is so powerful and relatable. The conclusion about finding "Faith" is a really wonderful and hopeful way to end the journey. Thank you for sharing this.

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  10. Thank you dear Melody for such a lovely and thoughtful words πŸ₯°πŸ™
    I named this instant poem “ A Journey To No Where “ only because no matter how hard we try to achieve peace of mind life still is a troubled game full of obstacles. We all go through it’s rough times and paths time to time and sometimes when we are one smooth phase pain of others keeps us feel miserable anyway πŸ˜”

    When look around for the solution,there seems none except having faith in One who is Creator of all this and keep trying to avoid adding your own mess to the world simply πŸ₯Ή

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  11. Um poema intenso, como uma visΓ£o, onde toda a realidade ficou ao seu alcance. Gostei.
    Uma boa semana.
    Um beijo.

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