Once upon a time there lived two sisters in a small beautiful village .They had loving family which had obviously some flaws too.Their mom was a pretty lady with wisdom and courage . She supported her daughters in their studies .Their father was a shopkeeper. .Though he loved his family but he often used to leave them alone with no financial support and disappeared for long period of time .During such times the family would suffer with so many crises .
In those hard days their mom worked hard to make them feel safe and earn bread for them .Such situations raised the love of their mother in their heart more then anything and both girls did their best to comfort and serve their mother and decided to look after her forever .They thought their father was a irresponsible man and when ever he returned back they did not treated him respectfully.
Time passed and girls reached in their youth.Sara was seven years older then her sister and had ordinary but attractive personalty .she was quiet and reserved person.She was not extra ordinary in her studies but she had good writing skills .Though due to be shy she never acted but she used to write for her school mag and stage .though she saw suffering and poverty but still she had a strong and confident personality .
She hated men because she saw the irresponsible behavior of her father and decided that she will never get married and never let any man to get close to her .Due to her rude attitude her male cousins tagged funny or bad names on her to tease her but She was happy because she wanted them to stay away from her at any cost .In her life she encountered many boys who tried to catch her attention but nothing could change her not their personalities nor positions .
Neena was a very beautiful girl with light green shade eyes fair color slightly golden hair she was a complete package of beauty and brain .She was aware of the power of her beauty and wanted to bring an overnight change in her life .She was rebellious of her situation and wanted to get rid of it immediately .
Whenever both sister talked about their future the elder sister always said that she don't want any sudden change in life ,if something better will happen in my life it will happen gradually and will be the result of my own efforts instead of any other 's help.
Neena always laughed at sara's simplicity and called it stupidity actually.She said life is not for to waste in long struggle which's result is unpredictable.One must take a short cut to get on top from where all has seen small.
After finishing the matriculation sara started teaching .Though salary was small but she was very happy that now she was able to support her family. She stopped her mom to work anymore as her health was becoming critical .Sara supported her sister in studies and continued her's too as this way she would be able to promoted and earn more.She thought that their sufferings were about to end now .
Since years sara was bothered by her one cousin Nile who wanted to marry her and once he put cut on his wrist front of her and tell her that see how much i love you as i am writing your name on my diary with my blood.He put lot of pressure on sara and her mom to be agree on this as he was a rich and spoiled boy of village and got many fellows with him .It made sara afraid and she decided to leave her job and go to any other city and look for new job and then shelter .If she will be establish she will bring her mom and sister with her.
To start her struggle she went to search job and stayed at the relative's house who treated her nicely.She told her uncle her problem and said that once she will get job she will be on her own .Those days were so hard for her and she was deeply sad and crushed .She hated men even more who always put a woman in misery.After almost one month's struggle sara got a job and felt peace of mind .After two she shifted in a working women hostel where she did not like the environment as women living their were taking the wrong advantages of their freedom .She felt uncomfortable but she kept moving.
One day sara received a letter from her sister that mom is very sick and wants to see you immediately .
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In those hard days their mom worked hard to make them feel safe and earn bread for them .Such situations raised the love of their mother in their heart more then anything and both girls did their best to comfort and serve their mother and decided to look after her forever .They thought their father was a irresponsible man and when ever he returned back they did not treated him respectfully.
Time passed and girls reached in their youth.Sara was seven years older then her sister and had ordinary but attractive personalty .she was quiet and reserved person.She was not extra ordinary in her studies but she had good writing skills .Though due to be shy she never acted but she used to write for her school mag and stage .though she saw suffering and poverty but still she had a strong and confident personality .
She hated men because she saw the irresponsible behavior of her father and decided that she will never get married and never let any man to get close to her .Due to her rude attitude her male cousins tagged funny or bad names on her to tease her but She was happy because she wanted them to stay away from her at any cost .In her life she encountered many boys who tried to catch her attention but nothing could change her not their personalities nor positions .
Neena was a very beautiful girl with light green shade eyes fair color slightly golden hair she was a complete package of beauty and brain .She was aware of the power of her beauty and wanted to bring an overnight change in her life .She was rebellious of her situation and wanted to get rid of it immediately .
Whenever both sister talked about their future the elder sister always said that she don't want any sudden change in life ,if something better will happen in my life it will happen gradually and will be the result of my own efforts instead of any other 's help.
Neena always laughed at sara's simplicity and called it stupidity actually.She said life is not for to waste in long struggle which's result is unpredictable.One must take a short cut to get on top from where all has seen small.
After finishing the matriculation sara started teaching .Though salary was small but she was very happy that now she was able to support her family. She stopped her mom to work anymore as her health was becoming critical .Sara supported her sister in studies and continued her's too as this way she would be able to promoted and earn more.She thought that their sufferings were about to end now .
Since years sara was bothered by her one cousin Nile who wanted to marry her and once he put cut on his wrist front of her and tell her that see how much i love you as i am writing your name on my diary with my blood.He put lot of pressure on sara and her mom to be agree on this as he was a rich and spoiled boy of village and got many fellows with him .It made sara afraid and she decided to leave her job and go to any other city and look for new job and then shelter .If she will be establish she will bring her mom and sister with her.
To start her struggle she went to search job and stayed at the relative's house who treated her nicely.She told her uncle her problem and said that once she will get job she will be on her own .Those days were so hard for her and she was deeply sad and crushed .She hated men even more who always put a woman in misery.After almost one month's struggle sara got a job and felt peace of mind .After two she shifted in a working women hostel where she did not like the environment as women living their were taking the wrong advantages of their freedom .She felt uncomfortable but she kept moving.
One day sara received a letter from her sister that mom is very sick and wants to see you immediately .
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Wow, what a story! I am looking forward to hearing more...
ReplyDeleteI am finding this story so fascinating. Please continue...
ReplyDeleteJane
A very interesting story. Sounds like a true life story. Looking forward for the next post....
ReplyDeleteI also look forward for the next post... Fascinating!
ReplyDeleteThis is intriguing! I want to know what happens next!
ReplyDeleteWhen is the next part? I look forward to it.
ReplyDeleteI'm rooting for Sara! And clearly, the Mom is a wonderful person.
ReplyDeleteHello!:) This is a captivating story, and I too will enjoy reading what happens next.:)
ReplyDeletevery interesting story
ReplyDeletevery interesting story as Gosia says, can't wait to hear more
ReplyDeleteLovely post dear! Have a great week! xx
ReplyDeleteCan I fast forward?
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting my blog and leaving a comment. You have written the beginning of a very interesting story!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read more!!!
ReplyDeleteYou are a wonderful writer and I too find your story very fascinating! Thank you so much for visiting me.
ReplyDeleteBe a sweetie,
Shelia ;)
Life is sometimes very hard, isn't it? This story was interesting to me because I am a mother with two daughters, and your first picture reminded me of them so much. The mom in your story was a wonderful woman. :)
ReplyDelete~Sheri
Your story and your choice of pictures is very good
ReplyDeleteAll the best Jan
I just finished reading the three parts to your story. You're a good writer, and it is interesting. In what country is the story set. Also, as an American, it seems strange that she would marry a "cousin..." Am I understanding correctly?
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